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Deconstruction

Away from the areas of complete ad nauseam As political cases grasp a zenith of their corium To utterly saturate the airwaves with information Each other's obnoxious and feeble description. I'm fully aware, listening to the unrelenting billow My musings have been integrated into a rainbow I lay, awake sketching vilifications of people's dignity I dream of a gloomy sky shadowing the faltered fury. As yet, they now sway the bulk of a mulish minority Putting fervor on the beliefs is harming harmony Watching the slivers of the sky inhale, I kept awake It mocks and taunts the deconstruction for its sake. Tumbling off, staggering forward, void and murkiness It was benign alighting and utterly scatting aimless The previous prone events will disturb our spirit The harshness of the truth is infused to arrant inhibit. While a million nights of misery had engulfed people I'm startled by the screams of forefathers over beguile I'm on high alert; grant heed to the rumble of my valiance Where did all this anger come from that incited violence? A significant alteration has been performed. Concussion healing occurred as a result of a storm Whatever happens, our promises will be crammed One irksome outlay may entice us all to the lowland.
Written: January 27, 2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 28 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Buhagiar Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 9:04 AM
There's depth of thought i this poem. Best for a win.
Cunningham Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 8:38 AM
Quite a deep and thought provoking verse Lasaad, you captured the theme of deconstruction well. Best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Profound, powerful, and realistic poem, my dearest friend, Lasaad. A lot of food for thought. Blessings.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Wow, Lasaad, this writ of yours will truly place high in Edward's contest. Absolutely magnificent wording you've used, mostly rare and uncommon, simply awe-struck am I my friend, Aloha!
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Your poem searches for answers in symphony of feelings and distress. Deep in thoughts, Lasaad.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 11:01 PM
Your pictures are terrifying. There's depth in its meaning.
George Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Great depth and amazing diction ! The power of the poem is augmented by the cartoon images ! Wish you all the best in the contest, dear friend!
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