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In the call to follow Christ Some create their own device They offer salvation and their advice In knowing that there's an after life Some are aware and take delight We have a choice, punishment or paradise To where we spend an unending life Where once were days of fault and vice Some not knowing about the price Paid for admission to that paradice It doesn’t matter who you like Doesn’t matter what What does matter is the when and where What really mattered is were you there When your soul finally declared The truth of what happened, Divine The revelation at that certain time The truth that was told with certain sighs That everything occurred by design Only to be interpreted as a crime I’m told a napkin was folded After they dined The work was finished and it was fine It reaches far into our lives Where heathens thoughts are compromised Where we once saw death and dispair Suddenly we saw a great repair Some may suffer with in a snare But once your saved Your no longer there

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Date: 2/9/2024 6:26:00 AM
Love the idea of being saved, especially after a guilty weekend where the devil possessed your soul.
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Date: 2/8/2024 9:41:00 AM
Enjoyed this spiritual write with a great message. love phyl
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Date: 1/31/2024 2:21:00 AM
The Bible tells us it is so easy, just believe, accept, ask the Holy Spirit in and then we are accepted into the kingdom. God writes our name in the book, and it remains there. He doesn't have a big eraser up there erasing names. Thanks for sharing your belief with us and for visiting my page. I can tell you have the faith. Sara K
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Date: 1/29/2024 1:40:00 AM
I once read that Jesus' napkin was folded because he was coming again. Still loved your spiritual poem. We must strive to keep the narrow path that leads to bliss.
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Date: 1/30/2024 4:46:00 PM
Like He said on the cross "It is finished"
Date: 1/27/2024 5:47:00 PM
A brilliant poem with such a profound message my friend.
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Date: 1/27/2024 4:03:00 PM
loved these lines, for they spoke to me: What does matter is the when and where What really mattered is were you there When your soul finally declared The truth of what happened, A poem filled with insight and wisdom. Liked it...have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/27/2024 12:59:00 PM
This feels so deep, my friend. A poem exploring the truth and meaning as we traverse through life and time.
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Book: Shattered Sighs