Decisions

Quote: “A man, after he has brushed off the dust and chips of his life, will have left only the hard, clean questions: Was it good or was it evil? Have I done well — or ill?” — John Steinbeck, East of Eden

In the desert of my days I wander,
the sun’s brittle crown upon cracked earth.
Dust drifts like old regrets between my steps,
and the horizon yawns — unforgiving and still.

Then the sea-storm rises inside me, roaring,
salt-heavy waves lash at the fragile dunes of hope.
A thunder-gulf within the ribcage demands its toll,
and I stand, drenched, amid the wreckage of decisions.

When the storm recedes, the desert lies hollow again,
wind-scrubbed, bare of consolation, shimmering in regret.
I ask the hard question beneath the pale, empty sky:
Was it good—or evil? Have I done well—or ill?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 23, 2025 at 10:24 AM
May your pen find solace in the process of creation. Exquisitely crafted verse, Jay. This poem, a tender confection, delights the senses with its sweetness. You have traversed the terrain of Steinbeck’s words, allowing them to meander through the valleys of moral reflection and the weight of outcomes. Splendid!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 3:55 PM
Steinbeck's, you've reflective on the thematics of self-judgment, regret, and the duality of good and evil, metaphors, and other usages as well. Essential hard truths, everyday actions, and those that accumulate over a lifetime. The inner turmoil of difficult choices and emotional struggle. Life where mistakes and successes have left their mark. The legacy of a life is its moral sum, not its material achievements. Excellent concluding assessment, my friend. Aloha.
Rodgers Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Hello Jay, elemental, unflinching, and beautifully composed. You’ve taken Steinbeck’s quote and let it through a landscape of conscience and consequence. Excellent! Autumn Blessings, Jay, Daniel
Andresen Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 10:42 AM
- Interesting and well written, Jay :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 10:12 PM
What a great response to the prompt. You did it so well
Springs Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 9:15 PM
Great poem. I like the line "Salt heavy waves at the fragile dunes of hope" . Wonderful imagery.
George Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 9:11 PM
We can't do anything always after weighing the pros and cons of an action. Sometimes, we have to act and take decisions quickly. All our actions and decisions may not be wise. Leave them as such and face the consequences. After all, we are human. A poem from a tormented heart.
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 2:40 PM
Those are hard questions to answer for oneself dear Jay, I think sometimes in certain situations, we do the best we can. Very well written, :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 11:45 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Decisions" write. Great Last Line... "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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