Barbara Gorelick Poet Free verse

Decision Made

City left  behind
The road eats up memories
A new life ahead

Blurred images pass
Ahead a shadow of green
A new life ahead

Desert brown recedes
Colors born of hope unfold
A new life ahead

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Raul Moreno April 19, 2009 at 1:27 PM New beginnings are on the verge. Beautiful work and I bid you good luck in your travels, I'm sure you will adapt to your new life...Raul

Christopher Higgins April 18, 2009 at 7:29 PM So where is the voice in the poem heading?...I hope its a place that brings ever lasting joy...love the last verse...well done.

Charmaine Chircop April 18, 2009 at 2:09 PM decision made for a new life ahead,keep walking through your path-never look back,wonderfully penned my friend-----charma

Sharon Winter April 18, 2009 at 6:31 AM Sounds like the hope of bright new beginnings. Each one alone so well written. Love the repetition of the last line. Awesome sequence. Love, Shar