Deception Unravels

Very deep write here..enjoyed.

Congratulations, Carolyn on your third place win in Chris's contest. It's another victory added to your glories! Thanks for your kind and welcome comments. Your encouragement and support are very appreciated. Have a blessed day and :). Love and hugs, Andrew.

Wonderful words that flow together great.A well deserved 3rd.place so a big congrats Carolyn.Teresa

Wonderful work. Congrats, Carolyn, on the win. Dan C

Great concept dear friend and thanks for your ever present encouragment. God bless. many congratulations fo your win.

no deception here, very clever write, love it. congrats for this contest winner. Harry

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

This was lovely. I really like the cinderella story and its image. LUv, Andrea

A wonderful , clever piece..congrats LNC, BG

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Many congratulations Carolyn with your second place in this toughie of a contest, well deserved >> James :)xx

Congratulations on this 2nd place win in the contest, Carolyn

By jove I think you've got it! Congrad's Light & Love

Hi Carolyn and super congrats on your win! I think it's pretty cool how you used Cinderella -- nikko :)

Well done, Carolyn..........I missed this one earlier, but, I may turn into a pumpkin if I don't catch such great entries! :)

congrats on your win in the contest , awesome job

oh yes this looks like a sheer winner to me hun gl in contest sad imagery tho cause darn carriage turned into pumpkin also thanks again for your support for my writes keep up the great work my friend

Love this senryu.. a perfect entry for the contest...luv michael

Nice mythic theme hear! Tomorrow is Yom Kippur - the Jewsih Day of Atonement - where "all mankind passses before you like a flock of sheep" Hope you are O.K. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Very nice overall image on so short a canvas. I like!

Poem: a sublime write Senryu limits broken Bathes me in delight

Really great, Carolyn! I'm looking forward to reading some other Senryus by You. Keep 'em coming. Dan C

This will be a good one for Halloween - the pumpkin coach and the masks. Good write, Carolyn - lots of speculation here. LOve, Dave

Another Gem like words revealing all that you have left to be imagined by the reader. A great beauty in this brilliant Senryu, my friend. No doubt it should be the best. My good wishes for your contest entry. And many thanks for your precious and lovely comments on Patradoot 40. Hope you would relish the remaining ten parts also of this unique story addressed to a letter. Love and good wishes always….Ravindra………Carolyn Devonshire

Bravo, a picture perfect piece as ever! Like this as it excites the muse further too making your reader linger longer on the words and thoughts evoked from them... A wonderful piece as we move towards rehearsal season! Kindest thoguhts, Anna-Marie.