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Deception

My heart secures fright, Forced into the light, My soul so contrite, My words become trite, Hear my lonely plight. I feel her cries, Disclaiming sighs, Without my lies, Breaking all ties, My love knew Lies in view, Breaking clue, Shall she, Blind me, Mad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 8:31:00 AM
wow great lines here i really enjoyed reading this today was very beautifully written!=)Jo
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Date: 2/18/2010 1:26:00 PM
A true view of what can happen in life when your in love with the wrong person. It's really a great piece!
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:28:00 PM
Cecil, congrats on your win in Catie's contest, God Bless, mj
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Date: 2/17/2010 4:00:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in the Hex contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write .. well deserved win for a talented poet.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...Enjoyed reading your poem...Marty
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:35:00 AM
Bravo, Cecil! Hear the drum rolls! You placed in the winners’ circle for your creative entry in the Poetry Soup member contest, “WHAT THE HEX” sponsored by: Catie Lindsey. Well done! (It looks like you are forming a habit...several wins lately!) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:45:00 AM
What a wonderful entry, dear Cecil! Congratulations on your win in the Hex contest!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/12/2010 9:57:00 PM
Wow! Great Hex. Good luck in the contest.
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Book: Shattered Sighs