Deception

My heart secures fright,
Forced into the light,
My soul so contrite,
My words become trite,
Hear my lonely plight.

I feel her cries,
Disclaiming sighs,
Without my lies,
Breaking all ties,

My love knew
Lies in view,
Breaking clue,

Shall she,
Blind me,

Mad
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:31 AM
wow great lines here i really enjoyed reading this today was very beautifully written!=)Jo
Augustus Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 1:26 PM
A true view of what can happen in life when your in love with the wrong person. It's really a great piece!
Jordan Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:28 PM
Cecil, congrats on your win in Catie's contest, God Bless, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in the Hex contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write .. well deserved win for a talented poet.. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Owens Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on your win...Enjoyed reading your poem...Marty
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February 17, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Bravo, Cecil! Hear the drum rolls! You placed in the winners’ circle for your creative entry in the Poetry Soup member contest, “WHAT THE HEX” sponsored by: Catie Lindsey. Well done! (It looks like you are forming a habit...several wins lately!) Smiles, Dane Ann
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 7:45 AM
What a wonderful entry, dear Cecil! Congratulations on your win in the Hex contest!! ~ Love, Carrie
Hilliker Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Wow! Great Hex. Good luck in the contest.
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