Decemberpoem

Silence shrouds the land,
steel gray clouds 
hang low overhead,
and the air 
smells of snow.

A jay, strangely silent  
peers down from
newly naked 
branches.
To the 
west, geese fly 
in rag tag formation 
not even bothering to V.

Entering the cedars, 
I leash the dogs
as the air smells of skunk,
Our breath hanging
just shy of steam,
as a solitary crow flaps across
the red-flecked eastern horizon.

Suspended, 
waiting for 
winter to 
come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lawless Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Well done Dave, you captured the moment perfectly. Congrats on the placement.
Rodgers Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 4:17 PM
Thanks John, as they say "seize the moment"
Johnson Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:37 PM
A very clear picture of the beginning of winter. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
Rodgers Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Thanks Joyce, keep warm
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Dave with this amazing write!
Cwiak Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Kudos on your win, Dave. I have seen some of the sights you describe...so they bring back some strange, haunting, and wonderful memories. Thanks for reminding me.
Rodgers Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Thanks Dan, glad to have nudged your memory
A  Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Hi Dave, ha I'd BE waiting for December to rid the smell as well. Awesome poem, Congratulations on your sweet December Win. SKAT
Rodgers Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 5:27 PM
Thanks SKAT, sigh with climate change, they are denning later.
Scars Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win!!! Be blessed :) -LU
Rodgers Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Thanks Laura
T  Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 1:18 PM
amazing imagery. Chase
Rodgers Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Thanks Chase, and many more thanks for holding the contest
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