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Decemberpoem

Silence shrouds the land, steel gray clouds hang low overhead, and the air smells of snow. A jay, strangely silent peers down from newly naked branches. To the west, geese fly in rag tag formation not even bothering to V. Entering the cedars, I leash the dogs as the air smells of skunk, Our breath hanging just shy of steam, as a solitary crow flaps across the red-flecked eastern horizon. Suspended, waiting for winter to come.

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Date: 11/6/2015 7:12:00 AM
Well done Dave, you captured the moment perfectly. Congrats on the placement.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/7/2015 4:17:00 PM
Thanks John, as they say "seize the moment"
Date: 11/3/2015 12:37:00 PM
A very clear picture of the beginning of winter. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/6/2015 9:30:00 PM
Thanks Joyce, keep warm
Date: 11/3/2015 12:59:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Dave with this amazing write!
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Date: 11/2/2015 10:52:00 PM
Kudos on your win, Dave. I have seen some of the sights you describe...so they bring back some strange, haunting, and wonderful memories. Thanks for reminding me.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/7/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thanks Dan, glad to have nudged your memory
Date: 11/2/2015 9:35:00 PM
Hi Dave, ha I'd BE waiting for December to rid the smell as well. Awesome poem, Congratulations on your sweet December Win. SKAT
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/6/2015 5:27:00 PM
Thanks SKAT, sigh with climate change, they are denning later.
Date: 11/2/2015 6:25:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win!!! Be blessed :) -LU
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/6/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 11/2/2015 1:18:00 PM
amazing imagery. Chase
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/6/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Chase, and many more thanks for holding the contest

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