December Sun .

December sun that hangs so low
To crawl across dim Winter cloud .
You were our friend six months ago
And wrapped me in your Summer shroud
Of coloured gardens , full of bloom 
That scented life
In my living room .

The long cold shadows that you cast ,
Like the frosted breaths of early morn 
That linger ..., yet , but never last ,
Like some dark and dreary love forlorn .
Memories of your crisp, clear cold
Long Winters past
Wrapped , but still unsold .

December sun of blinding light
No takers for your offer , here .
Your short day and your long cold night
The dying throes of one more year .
Your only pal , the Winter snow
Is children's friend
And farmer's foe .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Sean, I hate old man winter and often write on this exact theme myself. You did it VERY Well, So glad I looked back for a poem of yours I had not seen and found this treasure. A FAV. lUv,Andrea
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December 12, 2009 at 3:40 PM
Wonderful poetry Sean and I just luv those first four lines.. since I am a "beach baby" and baske in the summer sun all Summer.. the hotter the weather the better for me..enjoyed thinking Summer is only five months away... I always start in May... blessings... luv.. thankxxx for enjoying and commenting on my poetry today... glad u enjoyed... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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November 14, 2009 at 9:06 AM
What lovely descriptive verses so well written... I am a Summer Girl so Winter is not my friend... but ... December is a nice month of celebratory events so ... we still enjoy as this dynamic poetry of yours... thankxxx for sharing .. and for your comments on my poetry.. u truly have realized my secret.. I am an actress in disguise.. how far behind can Broadway be? luv ... Linda-Marie.. P.E.P.S. "Sweetie"
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September 28, 2009 at 4:13 AM
Sean, Not only are you able to write funny poems, but very excellent "REAL LIFE" poems. Your words flow perfectly. The rhyming is exact, and overall this poem brings delightful imagery even when about a chilling winter. You are talented... very talented. Keep writing. Love to you, Dane
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January 28, 2009 at 5:37 AM
What a perfectly lovely rhyme, Sean. This Robin is waiting patiently to sing praises to the Spirg Sun King. Regards to Mother Cat and Mr. Bumble Bee! Always enjoy your delightful poetry and comments! :) Rock'n Robin
Strand Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 11:53 PM
We could do with some in January as well Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2009 at 3:06 PM
I am cold too BUT at least we can bundle up! There's only so much that can come off in the summer Sean! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi PS I LOVEEEEEE the iciles
Omaidin Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 9:05 AM
This December Sun is great, fabulously written, beginning to sound like Wordsworth himself. Lovely scenes of winter. Regards Déirdre
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 3:42 PM
I like this. I still love the beach, the sun, and want to live where I don't need a shovel (that leaves Washington out but it ain't snow). Vince
Strand Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 1:27 AM
Sean you are a ray of sunshin here on Ps.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my endeavours in 2008.What happened to Munster yesterday ? Too much Christmas cheer perhaps
Chamma Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 2:57 PM
A beauty ...a simple elegant beauty...Love it...Take care and thanks for drawing natural images... Farah
White Avatar
December 27, 2008 at 6:16 PM
hi Sean, I love this beautifully landscaped picture that you paint with your words, hope that you are well, take care D-nyce
George   Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 8:02 PM
Hey Sean! I just read your comment on Michael's poem 'Duck President Bush' I can't stop laughing, and it's all your fault. QUACK! QUACK! . My response was ' If the shoe fits, wear it! Anyhow, thanks for the laugh. Have a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year. Love, Lainie P.S. I thought I had commented on this poem yesterday. I don't see my comment. I'm losin it! So, on a more serious note, this poem is one for my favorite list too. Your poetic heart is a blaze.
Strand Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 8:09 AM
One for the favourites listing Sean.Take heart today is the longest night.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome commnts
Winter Avatar
December 20, 2008 at 5:56 AM
Though you are not a happy winter camper, your poem is mostly one many can relate to. At least the children are happy in the snow (me too!) as I hope we actually do get a descent snowfall in this year, not so far. I do understand the season holds it's disadvantages as your poem so well points out, but remember, time flies by so quickly and soon enough that sun will be your kindest friend once more. Maybe the winter sun is not bright or warm enough Mr. Kelly, but you make up for that.Love, Shar
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December 20, 2008 at 4:03 AM
Well well well, Mr. Kelley, pulling out the long poem - I love this write. it has such a mournful, warm and chilly wuality to it, all wrapped together in layers of the beautiful. well done, my versitile friend, love, Kristin
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