Silent One Poet Free verse

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Following on from October and November rain... It is still raining..

December Rain

Unexpectedly the timid sun made an appearance,
an orb of flames, silent amidst the peaceful horizon.

Wistfully, the harmony was short lived.

Ferocious winds blew with merciless tones.

Melancholic rain returning with little remorse.

Inclement storms battering emotions,
brutally defeating them into oblivion.

Raindrops soaked like predatory demons,
in conjunction with bloodthirsty winds,
lost within the abyss of anguish and pain,
seeking shelter from vicious venomous daggers.

I stumbled upon the marketplace of sorrow,
surrounded by souls lost to a religion of perturbation.
Ambushed I remained, impatiently in this downpour degradation,
counting down the days of disturbing December deterioration.

Silent One
Originally written in 6 December 2015
Repost: 7 December 2017

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Ashok Kumar Mishra March 2, 2020 at 8:34 AM Excellent write but why do much sorrow???

Chris Hagy December 17, 2017 at 9:08 PM Beautiful write of sorrow... I've been there in that "December deterioration"... except here in Michigan it's freezing cold and snow :( Glad you decided to repost Silent... hope your holiday is not rainy! :)

Paul Callus December 12, 2017 at 1:53 PM Excellent imagery and metaphors, S-1. Enjoyed the overall content. Regards // paul Silent One December 12, 2017 at 3:27 PM Thank you Paul..

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 12, 2017 at 9:08 AM Oh, this pain is so wet cold, SO. You delivered the dark emotions felt w/great emotional imagery in this outstanding poem. You write Free Verse so well ... so visceral defined. As always, your pen shines bright ... even thru the darkness of which you write. Powerfully penned poetry. Love and smiles always, bruh. Silent One December 12, 2017 at 3:28 PM Thank you bruh, one more instalment of this left, will post in January..

Beautiful Scars December 12, 2017 at 7:04 AM such depth and emotion fills your paper...your pen seeps with the longing to belong once more....great one dear man! lullooo Silent One December 12, 2017 at 3:31 PM Thank you Lulloo..

Ravi Sathasivam December 10, 2017 at 12:46 AM Excellent. A beauty of art. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it. Silent One December 11, 2017 at 7:45 AM Thank you Ravi.

Winged Warrior December 9, 2017 at 9:17 PM Brilliant as usual my Silent friend...great rehash...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^ Silent One December 11, 2017 at 7:46 AM Thank you WW

Old Buck December 9, 2017 at 3:34 PM SO: I read this a couple times while the music played. Almost overcome with shivers. Intense. Thanks for sharing your talents with all of us on the soup. oldbuck Silent One December 11, 2017 at 7:46 AM Thank you Buck

James Swartz December 9, 2017 at 10:32 AM This my friend is perfect poetry. Your words are precise in their placement to describe the feelings a lot of us feel this time of year. Silent One December 11, 2017 at 7:47 AM Thank you James

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 9, 2017 at 6:51 AM Oh, wow. Impacting pen. Suits my melancholy :) a fine write my friend, truly art. xomo Silent One December 11, 2017 at 7:48 AM Thank you Mo

Susan Ashley December 8, 2017 at 8:29 PM Such woeful sorrow expressed in your pensive write Silent One. Beautiful melancholy in deep tones of sadness and shades of longing for the 'timid sun'. Stunning throughout, your last stanza was an artistically conveyed standout. The piano piece was hauntingly beautiful as well. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Eve Roper December 8, 2017 at 7:52 PM emotions so forlorn, but a beautiful poem.

Nette Onclaud December 8, 2017 at 4:22 PM so penetrating and well done, S O... you always come from the heart... very nice!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2017 at 2:33 PM - Melancholy is fortunately not a disease - Much beautiful art is melancholy, such as your poem, S.O. - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Isor Chand December 8, 2017 at 8:58 AM This poem brings me many thoughts as if they were happened just yesterday... Very nicely written that it speaks more deeply to me... Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:26 AM Thank you Isor..

Maria Williams December 7, 2017 at 8:23 PM Oh! send some rain down under we badly need it, though without the unremorseful melancholic note please. Si, as always the use of metaphors, your flowing liquid lines all go to make up yet another one of your brilliant poems, and the music choice is wonderful.....Maria Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:26 AM Thank you Maria... You can have as much rain as you wish..

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2017 at 7:00 PM Just heard the beginning of the piano piece. REally fits in with the poetry.

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2017 at 6:59 PM A most interesting one, Silent One. I have written of WARM December, which was a very lovely one but this one is quite the opposite! How horrible for a rain to continue from the fall as you said in the notes!! Good one that I see is a repost. you should have a great many poems to repost!! Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:26 AM Yes, I have over 700... Too many to post again... Thank you Andrea..

Becca Teagan December 7, 2017 at 4:46 PM :( Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:25 AM :(

Judith S December 7, 2017 at 1:56 PM The extremely dark, melancholic piano couldn't be more perfect for your amazing write Silent One. And to finalize with a flatline! It's almost as if reading a cinematic production. Each line dripping with sadness and weighted emotion. Just brilliant of course!! Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thank you Judy...

Donna Loughman December 7, 2017 at 1:01 PM Love the metaphors...” surround by souls lost to a religion of perturbation”..brilliant poem and a new fav! Thank you for posting-:) Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thank you Donna..

Akkina Downing December 7, 2017 at 11:28 AM It maybe written few years back, but exactly how I feel today. And I'm with John, I especially love,"market place of sorrow!" Your poem is absolutely breathing taking. Of course a fave for me... hugs and smiles :) Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:25 AM Thank you, I think many can relate to these emotions...

Joseph May December 7, 2017 at 8:39 AM December is fierce in it's weather. Great write Silent One Silent One December 8, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thank you Joseph..

Mike Gentile December 7, 2017 at 7:56 AM Your portrayal of anguish is deep and perfectly fashioned by the storm. I can see myself in it and also waiting for reprieve, Silent One.... Silent One December 7, 2017 at 8:02 AM Thank you Mike, I think many can relate to this.. It is a collection of poem, previous ones were October and November rain and I have one more called January rain..

Vijay Pandit December 7, 2017 at 6:43 AM I feel the pain and sorrow--well said in words like ..religion of degradation..very apt song, Silent One. Silent One December 7, 2017 at 8:05 AM Thank you Vijay..