December Days

Dusk falls early, the sky is painted in hues of grey,
Echoes of flute music hovers over leaf bare lanes,
Crisp air carries old separation songs and new quiet hope,
Each breath a frost-soft whisper by the window pane.
Memory seems to glide gently where the candles burn low,
Branches of trees seek help from heavens by stretching their arms towards the sky,
Easing of burdens we cannot undo or remake,
Rooted in faith like seeds beneath the cold ground lie.

Drift of snow-dust promises that beneath the hard earth
Awake the green, the unseen, the tender shoot of spring.
Yearning for rebirth, we stand in the stillness of time,
Surrendering what we cannot change, embracing what will bring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:46 PM
Wow. A gorgeous poem. Looking at what Valsa said : . . .did you not join the contest?
George Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Beautiful acrostic! How sedate and balanced is your way of looking at life with its unchangeable turn of events and your hopes of greeting another brighter life. Why don't you join the contest after composing verses on every given subject?
Rodgers Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 7:39 AM
Hello Jay, A wonderful acrostic that is full of patient endurance and the promise of renewal. I agree that the cold, quiet darkness of winter is a necessary period for reflection, letting go of past burdens, and cultivating a deep, rooted faith in the eventual return of life and light (spring). Let us celebrate stillness as a time of preparation for rebirth. Amen! Autumn Blessings, Jay, Danielk
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 11:42 AM
It's been a while since I've done acrostics; you've done yours well, Aloha.
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 10:08 AM
- I always admire Acrostic poems... I don't have the patience for this form... lovely written, Jay :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs
Rose  Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:26 PM
This is one of the most beautiful acrostics I ever did read Jay, nicely done. You should be proud !
Anaya Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Imagery so kind, altho starting November, I embrace another favorite month of mine, December. Ty for sharing this uplifter! November blessings~ xhugs
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:13 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "December Days" Acrostic write for the month of December. I love December. I also love the Acrostic style. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Hello Jay, December has cold temperatures. Snow storms freezing rain. It brings Christmas. Blessings my friend. . Darlene./
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