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December - A Time to Remember

December – A Time to Remember

Deep into Fall, as brown wrinkly-faced leaves wave adieu
Ebony evening sky twinkles with rhinestone-studded stars
Chilly winds blow … a sign that winter’s just next door
Erubescent sunsets flaunt their majestic golden crowns
Mingling with gray and white patches of layered cotton-white clouds
Beautiful, ruling planet Jupiter aligns with Venus and Mars
Ever the auspicious harbinger of wisdom, prosperity, and power…
Reminding my mother of the day I, her first child, was born.


12-06-2015

Contest:     Any Poem Written on your Birthday
Sponsor:     Laura Loo
Placement:  3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/10/2018 9:16:00 AM
A charming birthday acrostic. Each word is perfect, Pandita. Well done!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 2/10/2018 9:38:00 AM
Dear Line, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 11/25/2017 5:24:00 PM
Great verse!! Pandita :) Quite lovely. " Ahh! let us relish and remember the white fallen sands of December from gray green skies tears sheds as the horizon cries" Write On ---James
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 11/28/2017 8:52:00 AM
My dear friend, your compliments are wonderful poetic pieces onto themselves! Thank you for leaving me your lovely words! Best wishes. Pandita
Date: 3/15/2017 10:56:00 AM
lovely acrostic Pandita :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 3/17/2017 9:53:00 PM
Dear Laura, thank you very much for complimenting this piece and including it on your list of winners. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 3/14/2017 10:38:00 AM
Love the imagery in this nice Acrostic, Pandita, ... Congratulations on your win.. ~* Hugs Eve
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 3/14/2017 11:24:00 AM
Dear Eve, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you for your lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 1/2/2016 6:18:00 AM
Love this poem my friend. My son, Justin was born two days before Christmas in 2006. I come from a family of 13 children, none of us born in December.A7
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 1/2/2016 6:56:00 PM
My Mother and I are both December borns. Many thanks, my friend for the great honors you have given me! Wishing you the best in this new year! Pandita
Date: 12/17/2015 4:00:00 AM
i like this.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/19/2015 7:55:00 PM
Hi Kitumba, what a very nice compliment! Thank you so much and have a great weekend! Pandita
Date: 12/14/2015 7:06:00 PM
Very nicely done, Pandita
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/15/2015 7:36:00 AM
Hi Andie, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you! Pandita
Date: 12/13/2015 1:15:00 AM
This a stunning write Pandita! Thank you for a marvellous read!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/15/2015 7:37:00 AM
Dear Maurice, you warmed my heart with your wonderful praises. Thank you for your continued support and encouragement! Pandita
Date: 12/13/2015 12:41:00 AM
Excellent. A beautiful acrostic. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/15/2015 7:37:00 AM
Hi Ravi, I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita
Date: 12/11/2015 7:44:00 PM
Thank you for the comment on the poem wrote. Keep up the good work! I also like your poems too!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/12/2015 8:13:00 PM
Hi Shaniki, I really appreciate your visit! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita
Date: 12/8/2015 5:11:00 PM
I truly like this acrostic, Pandita...beautiful and adorned with striking imagery. #7 // May I wish you the very best for a lovely birthday:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/8/2015 5:15:00 PM
My dear Paul, thank you for the birthday greetings that truly warmed my heart, the high score, and wonderful compliments! Thank you for your constant support and inspiration! Best regards. Pandita
Date: 12/8/2015 3:05:00 PM
This is an amazing write. A fantastic acrostic that flows so beautifully and creates a lovely imagery. A7 and fav's. T.J
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Date: 12/8/2015 5:13:00 PM
Dear T.J. you warmed my heart with your wonderful praises, high score and fave! Thank you for your continued support and encouragement! Pandita
Date: 12/8/2015 4:46:00 AM
This should be set up as an example of how to write a correct Acrostic Pandita! It is awesome! This is a fave! #7
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/8/2015 1:06:00 PM
Ahhhhhh! I am so humbled by your lovely compliments, fave, and high score! Thank you so very much, Connie! Pandita
Date: 12/7/2015 3:02:00 AM
Very nice Acrostic poem. I am glad that I read it on right time :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/7/2015 8:54:00 AM
I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you! Pandita
Date: 12/6/2015 10:50:00 PM
What a fabulous Acrostic! Pandita, I enjoyed reading this piece with its awesome imagery! Well done and a 7! Kika
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 12/6/2015 10:52:00 PM
Hi Kika, thank you very much for your great compliments and high score! Pandita
Date: 12/6/2015 8:30:00 PM
A beautiful acrostic, Pandita! Excellent imagery! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/6/2015 10:03:00 PM
Hi kim, I really appreciate your lovely compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Pandita