Deceiver Senryu

slight of hand
deception –
the magician’s tools
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Yes, there is that person out there that is this exactly in their personality..One needs to watch out for this kind of person..Thanks for the kind comments on my poem about my Halloween Costume...I enjoyed your remarks about as much as I did writing the poem...Sara
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 9:16 AM
A terrific Senryu.Congrats on your 9th.place win.Teresa
Cwiak Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 2:45 AM
All too true, Joe. Sometimes I wish I were as much a magician with words. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Horsman Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 6:49 AM
congratulations on this excellent winner in the contst. Harry
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:07 PM
Nicely done, nicely won. Congratulations, Joe.
Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:48 PM
The Grand Illusion, no illusion about this magic Senyru. Congratulations Joe on your win >> James
Muzzey Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:00 PM
A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl
Devonshire Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Glad to see this senryu get recognition, Joe. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 1:04 PM
And what would the topic be without a magician? Glad to read this Joe :) Congrats on your win!! :)-- nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 12:02 PM
Congrats Joe on your super win in the Senryu contest... an awesome victory ... my friend.. enjoy today with luv...
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 10:32 AM
nice one Joe, congrats on your win in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 11:37 PM
A great topic for this contest, Joe. Good luck in Chris' great contest!!
Locksley Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 2:16 PM
Good work on the deception topic, Joe. Magicians are masters of deceipt. Good luck in the contest. Diane
Muzzey Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 12:00 PM
A great Senryu! I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Brown Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 10:19 AM
The best to you in the contest with this excellent Senryu Joe. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 8:18 AM
Great entry for Chris's contest, Joe! Wish there were a way to rid the world of some of these "magicians." Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 3:51 AM
awesome concept, thinking outside the box.. best wishes for the contest.. :) Wilma
Horsman Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 10:32 PM
good discription, Joe, enjoyed. Good luck. Harry
Roberts Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 9:30 PM
good one Joe, good luck in the contest
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