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Deceiver Senryu

slight of hand
deception –
the magician’s tools

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2010 2:31:00 PM

Yes, there is that person out there that is this exactly in their personality..One needs to watch out for this kind of person..Thanks for the kind comments on my poem about my Halloween Costume...I enjoyed your remarks about as much as I did writing the poem...Sara

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/26/2010 9:16:00 AM

A terrific Senryu.Congrats on your 9th.place win.Teresa

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:45:00 AM

All too true, Joe. Sometimes I wish I were as much a magician with words. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:49:00 AM

congratulations on this excellent winner in the contst. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:30:00 AM

Congratulations Joe on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 11:07:00 PM

Nicely done, nicely won. Congratulations, Joe.

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 3:48:00 PM

The Grand Illusion, no illusion about this magic Senyru. Congratulations Joe on your win >> James

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 3:00:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 2:32:00 PM

Glad to see this senryu get recognition, Joe. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 1:04:00 PM

And what would the topic be without a magician? Glad to read this Joe :) Congrats on your win!! :)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 12:02:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your super win in the Senryu contest... an awesome victory ... my friend.. enjoy today with luv...

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:32:00 AM

nice one Joe, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2010 11:37:00 PM

A great topic for this contest, Joe. Good luck in Chris' great contest!!

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/15/2010 2:16:00 PM

Good work on the deception topic, Joe. Magicians are masters of deceipt. Good luck in the contest. Diane

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/15/2010 12:00:00 PM

A great Senryu! I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2010 10:19:00 AM

The best to you in the contest with this excellent Senryu Joe. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 8:18:00 AM

Great entry for Chris's contest, Joe! Wish there were a way to rid the world of some of these "magicians." Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn