Deceiver Caught Inside the Web

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to say it as the truth would hurt those deeply pained

circle of life and death for those cornered

some never can see past the full stop when nabbed

The mental instability of a liar when they hear the truth cursing begins ugly you are judging me seems to be their next move cornered crying the victim, pity feel sorry for me me me I am a good person the first sin tells its tale those under the veil of sight replying violently in nature Which corner alters your ego to put up such a fight what rules apply to the under dog quarrelling There is only one circle drawn in the sand we are all sinners needing forgiveness every day pride you will not let go through sheer stubborn behaviour chained to the fragments of a soul's spirit trust has been betrayed never will it say sorry even when proven wrong it quarrels about position the highest value holds the light separating darkness

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/19/2019 6:27:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))A very true,powerful poem, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Sadly, we're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted days!Lots of hate everywhere!All so sad!But with God can have Love Light Salvation!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Lets pray more for all, especially all the blind and the lost souls!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7+7!A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are okay in all, Liam.Remember the Lords always with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^