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Deceiver Caught Inside the Web

The mental instability of a liar
when they hear the truth cursing begins ugly 
you are judging me seems to be their next move
cornered crying the victim, pity feel sorry for me me me

I am a good person the first sin tells its tale 
those under the veil of sight replying violently in nature
Which corner alters your ego to put up such a fight
what rules apply to the under dog quarrelling

There is only one circle drawn in the sand
we are all sinners needing forgiveness every day 
pride you will not let go through sheer stubborn behaviour
chained to the fragments of a soul's spirit
trust has been betrayed never will it say sorry 
even when proven wrong it quarrels about position 
the highest value holds the light separating darkness

Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2019

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Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 10/19/2019 6:27:00 PM Hi Liam!:))A very true,powerful poem, you've written here ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Sadly, we're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted days!Lots of hate everywhere!All so sad!But with God can have Love Light Salvation!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:))Lets pray more for all, especially all the blind and the lost souls!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7+7!A fav !You have a heart of gold!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are okay in all, Liam.Remember the Lords always with you no matter what!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply