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Deceived

I saw a rose with petals red. I reached for it in haste. But thorns pierced my hands instead. That was a sad mistake. Like that precious rose that bloomed thus did my love for you. I should have known that I was doomed. And now our love is through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/15/2011 6:18:00 AM
I love how you rhymed it and put in so much emotion.
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