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Poetry/Free Verse/decaying
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1572-805-18
All Rights Reserve, 2023, Constance La France

Written, August 19, 2023
For the International Contest, No. 1237, New Poem Only
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/22/2023

Sixth Place

Free House Abandoned photo and picture

house long forgotten where whispers still drift in a tangled forest green and lush vines and flowers invading the rooms ... for nature always reclaims what is hers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/21/2023 2:43:00 PM
Stateing a know fact has it beauty.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2023 3:12:00 PM
Situation, thank you so much for the comment, there is beauty even in decaying, blessings !
Date: 8/20/2023 8:31:00 PM
Great write and I love the photo. Thank you for my placement in your contest. Many blessings to you, my friend.
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Date: 8/21/2023 3:13:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, an comment, blessings !
Date: 8/20/2023 9:44:00 AM
"Where whispers still drift in a tangled forest, green and lush, vines and flowers" Ahh, breathtakingly carved, elegant piece that expresses a tapestry of delicate emotions whilst weaving myriad imagery in front of the eyes.. "Nature always reclaims what is hers" What a beautiful description.. Love this so much!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2023 9:51:00 AM
Hiya, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, appreciate, blessings !
Date: 8/20/2023 8:38:00 AM
A strong depiction of times interdiction Constance, I would use the word creation I think Darwin coined the term nature.? Good to read your lines again'
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2023 9:51:00 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the compliment, nice to hear from you, blessings !
Date: 8/19/2023 2:11:00 PM
The eloquence and rhythm displayed in your choice of words and the overall composition of this poem are truly captivating. Your talent for crafting such beautiful words is just inspiring, Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 8/20/2023 9:52:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the lovely compliment and comment on my poem and the compliment on my writing, blessings !
Date: 8/18/2023 11:21:00 PM
nature always have the last word, nicely written
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Constance La France
Date: 8/18/2023 11:31:00 PM
Yann, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, so true, blessings !

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