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Decaying

               house
       long forgotten
    where whispers still 
                             drift   
        in a tangled forest
 green and lush
                  vines and flowers 
invading
      the rooms  ...
          for nature always
  reclaims what is hers

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The Situation Date: 8/21/2023 2:43:00 PM Stateing a know fact has it beauty. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/21/2023 3:12:00 PM Situation, thank you so much for the comment, there is beauty even in decaying, blessings !

Eve Roper Date: 8/20/2023 8:31:00 PM Great write and I love the photo. Thank you for my placement in your contest. Many blessings to you, my friend. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/21/2023 3:13:00 PM Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, an comment, blessings !

Hiya Sharma Date: 8/20/2023 9:44:00 AM "Where whispers still drift in a tangled forest, green and lush, vines and flowers" Ahh, breathtakingly carved, elegant piece that expresses a tapestry of delicate emotions whilst weaving myriad imagery in front of the eyes.. "Nature always reclaims what is hers" What a beautiful description.. Love this so much! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/20/2023 9:51:00 AM Hiya, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, appreciate, blessings !

Joe Maverick Date: 8/20/2023 8:38:00 AM A strong depiction of times interdiction Constance, I would use the word creation I think Darwin coined the term nature.? Good to read your lines again' Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/20/2023 9:51:00 AM Joe, thank you so much for the compliment, nice to hear from you, blessings !

Sotto Poet Date: 8/19/2023 2:11:00 PM The eloquence and rhythm displayed in your choice of words and the overall composition of this poem are truly captivating. Your talent for crafting such beautiful words is just inspiring, Constance Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/20/2023 9:52:00 AM Sotto, thank you so much for the lovely compliment and comment on my poem and the compliment on my writing, blessings !

Yann Rolland Date: 8/18/2023 11:21:00 PM nature always have the last word, nicely written Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 8/18/2023 11:31:00 PM Yann, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, so true, blessings !