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Poetry/Free Verse/decaying
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1572-805-18
All Rights Reserve, 2023, Constance La France

Written, August 19, 2023
For the International Contest, No. 1237, New Poem Only
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/22/2023

Sixth Place

Free House Abandoned photo and picture

Decaying



               house
       long forgotten
    where whispers still 
                             drift   
        in a tangled forest
 green and lush
                  vines and flowers 
invading
      the rooms  ...
          for nature always
  reclaims what is hers

naturefree verse

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The Situation

August 21, 2023 at 2:43 PM

Stateing a know fact has it beauty.

Constance La France

August 21, 2023 at 3:12 PM

Situation, thank you so much for the comment, there is beauty even in decaying, blessings !

Eve Roper

August 20, 2023 at 8:31 PM

Great write and I love the photo. Thank you for my placement in your contest. Many blessings to you, my friend.

Constance La France

August 21, 2023 at 3:13 PM

Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, an comment, blessings !

Hiya Sharma

August 20, 2023 at 9:44 AM

"Where whispers still drift in a tangled forest, green and lush, vines and flowers" Ahh, breathtakingly carved, elegant piece that expresses a tapestry of delicate emotions whilst weaving myriad imagery in front of the eyes.. "Nature always reclaims what is hers" What a beautiful description.. Love this so much!

Constance La France

August 20, 2023 at 9:51 AM

Hiya, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, appreciate, blessings !

Joe Maverick

August 20, 2023 at 8:38 AM

A strong depiction of times interdiction Constance, I would use the word creation I think Darwin coined the term nature.? Good to read your lines again'

Constance La France

August 20, 2023 at 9:51 AM

Joe, thank you so much for the compliment, nice to hear from you, blessings !

Sotto Poet

August 19, 2023 at 2:11 PM

The eloquence and rhythm displayed in your choice of words and the overall composition of this poem are truly captivating. Your talent for crafting such beautiful words is just inspiring, Constance

Constance La France

August 20, 2023 at 9:52 AM

Sotto, thank you so much for the lovely compliment and comment on my poem and the compliment on my writing, blessings !