Decay

tranquility and I - trampled earth and greens gone astray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Deep one. and really cool. Congrats.
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Congratulations on your win!
A  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 11:26 AM
ANNA, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **
Selfa Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Perfectly doneAnna ! :) Congratulations. -hans
Inman Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 6:09 AM
The title seems so serious, but I find it could also be read as a lighthearted commentary on the simple frustrations of everyday life. Nice write Anna.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:38 AM
Wow Anna so lovely.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!!
A   Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 8:49 PM
anna, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --
Li Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 1:02 AM
Thank you to you too! I really enjoyed it and I'll check your blog out! :)
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 11:41 PM
love the meaning behind the verse, :)
Li Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 4:17 AM
Thanks! :) :)
Whatley Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Corruption and decay; some of my favourite themes. This short piece paints such a surreal image in my mind. Great piece Anna!
Li Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Yes, tis' my fave themes too! Thanks!
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