Decay

tranquility and I - trampled earth and greens gone astray

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:13:00 PM

Deep one. and really cool. Congrats.

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 2:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:26:00 AM

ANNA, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/26/2016 9:15:00 AM

Perfectly doneAnna ! :) Congratulations. -hans

James Inman

Date: 1/25/2016 6:09:00 AM

The title seems so serious, but I find it could also be read as a lighthearted commentary on the simple frustrations of everyday life. Nice write Anna.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/25/2016 2:38:00 AM

Wow Anna so lovely.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 8:49:00 PM

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Anna Li
Date: 2/29/2016 1:02:00 AM

Thank you to you too! I really enjoyed it and I'll check your blog out! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2016 11:41:00 PM

love the meaning behind the verse, :)

Anna Li
Date: 1/9/2016 4:17:00 AM

Thanks! :) :)

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/7/2016 7:23:00 AM

Corruption and decay; some of my favourite themes. This short piece paints such a surreal image in my mind. Great piece Anna!

Anna Li
Date: 1/7/2016 8:06:00 PM

Yes, tis' my fave themes too! Thanks!