Decay

life is but nothing when health has gone to decay - a passion for death ____________________________________ September 1, 2013 Poetry/Senryu/decay Copyright Protected, ID 09-502-880-01 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:58:00 AM
So true Constance.I have sent you a soupmail.
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:08:00 PM
Constance, this had to be one of my very favorites on the list. BIG congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/23/2013 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations ....Seren
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:35:00 PM
You moved me with such few words. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/22/2013 8:42:00 PM
congratulations...Linda
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Date: 9/22/2013 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Date: 9/21/2013 3:25:00 PM
Quite a somber write Broken wing; I guess points here Have been considered by many; a lot in this poem congrats on the win..'
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:11:00 AM
This indeed has a powerful message! But so true! Sad but true........ Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 9/21/2013 8:55:00 AM
so very true, I have seen this in terminally ill loved ones....good write, powerful senryu...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:55:00 AM
Connie congrats on being placed Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/21/2013 7:17:00 AM
Congrats on the win with this Senryu. You have taken it very lightly, Broken Wings
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Date: 9/17/2013 10:50:00 AM
Tough one to read Donna dear Donna! An excellent entry into the doctor's contest! Good luck! Love ya, Jack xoxoxox
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Date: 9/10/2013 6:15:00 PM
oh my, THAT Is a great way to put it. I can so well understand a person feeling this way now that I have grown familiar with aches and pains!! very nice, Constance.
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Date: 9/6/2013 1:47:00 PM
wow, very powerful write here, Constance
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Date: 9/1/2013 9:30:00 PM
Thanks for the entry,
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Date: 9/1/2013 4:44:00 PM
This write is so very true, I understand this well when I saw my grandmother decay in her health...which led eventually to her death! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a powerful message you present within this piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:57:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest..Thanks for placing my poem in the winners' list in your contest..It is an honor to be listed there..This poem made me think about your health..How are you doing..Sara
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