Constance La France Poet Senryu

Decay

 
life is but nothing
when health has gone to decay -
a passion for death


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September 1, 2013


Poetry/Senryu/decay
Copyright Protected, ID 09-502-880-01
All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France

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Kash Poet December 8, 2013 at 7:58 AM So true Constance.I have sent you a soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2013 at 5:08 PM Constance, this had to be one of my very favorites on the list. BIG congrats for your win.

Seren Roberts September 23, 2013 at 12:57 AM Congratulations ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 9:35 PM You moved me with such few words. Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2013 at 8:42 PM congratulations...Linda

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2013 at 6:43 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Joe Maverick September 21, 2013 at 3:25 PM Quite a somber write Broken wing; I guess points here Have been considered by many; a lot in this poem congrats on the win..'

Carrie Richards September 21, 2013 at 9:11 AM This indeed has a powerful message! But so true! Sad but true........ Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Sandra Adams September 21, 2013 at 8:55 AM so very true, I have seen this in terminally ill loved ones....good write, powerful senryu...congrats on your win :)

Shadow Hamilton September 21, 2013 at 7:55 AM Connie congrats on being placed Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta September 21, 2013 at 7:17 AM Congrats on the win with this Senryu. You have taken it very lightly, Broken Wings

Jack Ellison September 17, 2013 at 10:50 AM Tough one to read Donna dear Donna! An excellent entry into the doctor's contest! Good luck! Love ya, Jack xoxoxox

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2013 at 6:15 PM oh my, THAT Is a great way to put it. I can so well understand a person feeling this way now that I have grown familiar with aches and pains!! very nice, Constance.

Jack Horne September 6, 2013 at 1:47 PM wow, very powerful write here, Constance

Dr.Ram Mehta September 1, 2013 at 9:30 PM Thanks for the entry,

Russell Sivey September 1, 2013 at 4:44 PM This write is so very true, I understand this well when I saw my grandmother decay in her health...which led eventually to her death! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a powerful message you present within this piece, Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick September 1, 2013 at 2:57 PM Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Dr. Ram's contest..Thanks for placing my poem in the winners' list in your contest..It is an honor to be listed there..This poem made me think about your health..How are you doing..Sara