James Inman Poet Etheree

Decadent Peach Ice Cream

Sultry day, my tight T-shirt clings to me. 
I feel the chill between my fingers.  
Moist, silk against my cooling lips,
with frozen tangy fruit treats.
Luscious taste on my tongue
Melting sweetness, it's
Dripping... dripping.
Oh!  Frozen
peach ice
cream...



10/23/15

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Laura Hay November 12, 2015 at 3:25 PM Peach ice cream certainly sounds delish! Must give it a try, well done too on your win! Laura Hay November 13, 2015 at 1:37 AM I love peaches and you've definitely tempted me to try this through your fab poem :) James Inman November 12, 2015 at 4:35 PM Thanks Laura, where I live peach ice cream is the ultimate home made ice cream. If you haven't tried it you should (if you like peaches).

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 1, 2015 at 10:26 PM Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome yummy write James! James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:11 PM Thank you Dr. Sharma.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 1, 2015 at 8:11 PM James, I love it that you chose etheree, I was actually hoping that entries will be in this form, creatively done!!! imagery is wow!!! ~Olive ELoisa =`) James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:10 PM Olive Eloisa!! What a delicious contest! Thank you for hosting it and for the nice comment.

Michael Tor November 1, 2015 at 5:27 PM Nice win James! James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:08 PM Michael, nice of you to visit, thanks.

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2015 at 5:02 PM I think I shared a placement with you. Yours was one of my faves for how you wrote it using etheree. Congrats, my friend. James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:07 PM Beat me by one place, Andrea. Always happy to be next to you. Thanks for the nice words. (Etheree Buddies)

Sara Kendrick November 1, 2015 at 3:33 PM Ahh!! Melt in your mouth goodness!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara __I do like that peach ice cream... James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:04 PM Me too, with big chunks of fresh peaches. Thank you Sara.

Jan Allison November 1, 2015 at 3:29 PM dropping back with my congrats james:-) hugs jan xx James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:03 PM Thank you Jan.

Skat A November 1, 2015 at 2:56 PM James, congratulations. SKAT James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:03 PM Thanks SKAT!

Eve Roper November 1, 2015 at 12:39 PM Wonderful write, James, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:03 PM Thank you for the kind words, Eve.

Sandra Haight November 1, 2015 at 10:38 AM Nice imagery and description, James. Congrats on your win! Sanda James Inman November 1, 2015 at 11:02 PM Sandra, thank you.

Lin Lane November 1, 2015 at 8:37 AM A very sweet win, James. Homemade peach ice cream is a favorite. James Inman November 1, 2015 at 10:09 AM Thanks Lin, It took a while to come up with something for this.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2015 at 6:13 PM YUM!!!!! This is luscious, Ralph!! I love when an etheree is used so descriptively. James Inman October 30, 2015 at 7:48 PM Thanks Andrea. I love ice cream.

Jan Allison October 23, 2015 at 2:29 PM mmm a lovely Etheree - its as pretty as a peach James:-) hugs Jan xx James Inman October 23, 2015 at 2:35 PM Thanks Jan