Debbie-Do Flew

As a girl in my teen I did stray
to the circus I did run away
I wanted to fly
high in the sky
But, Mother wanted me to dance ballet!

Yes Debbie-Do flew upon a trapeze
in sequined tights with a rod 'tween her knees
her hair in a tail
her cleavage unveiled
I was the toast of the town if you please!

As I preened on the platform up high
and powdered my two hands and my thighs
one fine reporter
said I really aughta
Try out for the circus in Shanghai.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 9:27 AM
whopping congrats on your win, debbie.. so ticklish with thigh, cleavage and all.. :) huggs!
May Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 7:25 AM
congrats on your win
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
O'Leary Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 4:28 AM
Congrats... Terry
Williams Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 3:45 AM
Debbie congrats on your win, still not made up my mind if this is real or not, but I like the idea of your cleavage being unveiled he he ...David
Goodson Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Enjoyable Limerick read-I liked it very much. Your kicker "Shanghai" is good.
Mccann Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 8:24 PM
Very cliff-hanging stuff, Dbb (oh, someday, be on the look out for my poem with the word/name DollBaBy in it. Hehe). You sure are a life of the party?
Horne Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 12:03 PM
lol, had a good chuckle here, debs. thanks for your encouraging comments and your help too, my friend x
Wesley Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Quite a sight I must say Debbie, I think there's no ease on a flying trapeze but be that as it may it is easy to say you'r a sight that does tease (the eye of course:) Luv, Lizzie
Peranteau Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Nope...I can only see you in a temple ! *smiles* Fun write dear poet !Very happy I am to cross your path...have a wonderful new week Deb ! Much love, james
K. Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 1:36 AM
Hi Debbie :D! Well this sure is a super fun write! Now I can't help but imagine you way up there in your sequined tights! And hmmm you mentioning Shanghai now makes me think of those Chinese contortionists-- have you ever seen them? Amazing! Btw, just me, but maybe that is 'oughta'? If I'm wrong, chalk it up to silly monkey :D Also thanks so much to you & Cyndi for my placement in your contest :D I know my meter still needs major work, heehee :D but happy to have written that :D hugs to you!
Guzzi Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 7:33 AM
since I was using slang I think either one is OK nikko BUT THANKS for keeping a sharp eye on me!
Burch Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 7:37 PM
LOL!! This one is funny too!! Debbie! I just read 'Fat Man' in both as written and 1st person...lol both hillarious...you have a warpped sense of humour kiddo...just like me LOL!! :D I wish wins for you! big hugs, love debby
Devonshire Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 3:29 PM
LOL This is brilliant, Deb. Had such fun reading it! (My mom insisted I take ballet if I wanted acrobat lessons.) Looks like quite a few of us chose to write about the high wire walkers at the circus. The last verse had me rolling. Winning wishes for you, dear. Love, Carolyn
Baity Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 1:59 PM
i luv this Debby...very cute...smiles... Chiquita
O'Leary Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 9:48 AM
Very nice (& funny) tale... so limericky... Terry
Poet Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 7:33 AM
Enmoyed the fun very much Debi.Best wishes to you.
Butterfly Avatar
April 28, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Very sweet and cute, Debbie, best of luck with yuur limerick and thanks for all your supportive comments on my poetry
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 11:29 PM
this is very cute, Debs!! soupmail
Grisetti Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 3:50 PM
Sounds like a lot of fun, flying. Also sounds like oyu are having fun. Great poem.
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