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Death's Sweet Song



Oh euthanasia, death's sweet song,
your word so smoothly flows along.
I can no longer bear his pain;
my love and prayers were all in vain.

His eyes are pleading for this wrong.
Oh euthanasia, death's sweet song,
you soothe my heart to set him free;
his frantic words are begging me.

Those pills are there, upon the stand;
I reach for them with shaking hand.
Oh, euthanasia, death's sweet song,
says that his pain's gone on too long.

His heart is pleading, mine stands still;
he drinks the nectar to fulfill
release from pain...his peace, now strong;
Oh, euthanasia, death's sweet song.


July 21, 2016

~8th Place
Premiere Contest: Delirium
Sponsor: Kai Neuman
Judged: 07/31/2020

~4th Place~
Premiere Contest: Suicide Prevention Month - (euthanasia is assisted suicide)
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 09/19/2017
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Scars Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 4:23 AM
you wrote things I never thought of before, great poem, thank you and congrats sweet lady ;)
La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Sandra, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:03 PM
So touching...Congrats on your win with such an eye opening poem to many...Love Sunita
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 12:58 PM
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem. I understand it completely as I watched both my parents die of cancer. Congratulations....
Dutta Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 9:12 AM
So well penned even being a killer.I admire. Congrats to win
Bradfield Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Well done, Sandra...tough subject and your take is sensitive and caring..Larry
May Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Well penned Sandra...Congrats on your win
Chansarkar Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Oh,the poem and the picture stir so many emotions Sandra,congratulations!
Y. Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Woods    Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 5:12 AM
I must admit that the jury is out in my mind whether euthanasia is okay or not. However we do put down animals to relieve them of misery, yet expect our loved ones to undergo terrible suffering. Thought provoking write.
Scars Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Sandra, this is such a good take on the contest, I am struggling with this one and not sure if I will enter yet..good luck lady :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 2:08 PM
It is hard for me to be inspired for this contest because I don't harbor any murderous thoughts, but I see a doable idea was done by you and oh, so well. This is real life, a situation many good people face and I think your emotional poem is most touching, lovely and sad all rolled together. CayCay
Y. Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Hi Sandra, This is good take on the theme of the contest. I really don't believe in euthanasia but you composed a good piece. The main character was so distraught and in so much pain as well. But in the end they couldn't bare to see their loved one suffer anymore. Excellent job! Good luck in the contest 7:-) Alexis
Turner Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Very thought provoking write and emotive. I do believe in euthanasia and think it is a right. Richard Dreyfuss once made a movie entitled,"Whose Life is it Anyway" It will give one a whole new outlook on the practice. I hope I have the opportunity and the guts! Good luck in contest Mrs. Sandra.
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Hi Daniel, thank you for your visit and supportive comments. Not so sure how I feel about the subject, but I thought it would be a 'more gentle way' to approach the contest theme of 'murder'! Sandra
Kent Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Great subject matter, gets people thinking.
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Thank you for your visit and supportive comment, Ronald. Much appreciated. Sandra
Gupta Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Very interesting take and a lovely poem ...
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Probir...a more 'gentle way' to approach the theme of 'murder' in the contest! Sandra
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