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Deaths Black Shadow

Run don’t walk slipping through the fingers of deaths black glove falling through the walls. You need to realize your special not the same you’re the one death want s for his own Taking through the hollows of every kid’s imagination having nothing their falling through the crack in the ceiling. Wood rotting, falling down, and crashing in the woods. trees killing your innocence with every shadow crisp breath or shaky voice. Your get covered in black silk. Dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 9:19:00 PM
Grace, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:05:00 PM
A very deep poem. The title alone is epic. I like the look of black silk dead. Very different Grace,, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 10:06:00 AM
I suggest you don't listen to Mr. Seals dear and you keep writing from the heart. "The scars in my heart they will find a way". Welcome to the Soup Grace. God Bless you in your endevenours!
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Date: 5/1/2013 9:38:00 AM
I suggest you write this in a more traditional poem form, would make it easier to both read and follow what your saying. Don't give up if you feel you have things to say. If you want feedback in the soup you will need to comment on others work, mostly they comment in return. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/30/2013 7:31:00 PM
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