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Death's Autumn Sway

alone the widow seeks autumn ground stray thoughts both beautiful profound a rendezvous with soul’s despair while skittish fingers curl locks of hair it’s death’s treachery tore us apart in silence strung my heavy heart dangled dubiously by a lone thread while birds of prey hovered overhead they circled a drab once spring green park till nightfall drenched it in foul sullen dark bitter feelings of abandon ever fathomless left me brokenhearted and frightly breathless AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on February 20, 2020 for contest WRITING PROMPT – TEN WORDS sponsored by DEAR HEART - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 3/11/2020 4:57:00 PM
How did I miss this beautifully poignant poem Line? So well written and congratulations on your top place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 3/11/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. It's hard to keep up ~ not enough hours in a day. Hugs xx
Date: 3/11/2020 1:48:00 AM
Back with congrats Line..
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Date: 3/11/2020 3:26:00 PM
Thanks, Jenish.
Date: 3/10/2020 5:54:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and thanks for taking part _Constance
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Date: 3/10/2020 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. It's an honor.
Date: 2/22/2020 10:23:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. You have this!
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Date: 2/23/2020 3:13:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 2/21/2020 11:37:00 PM
Nicely written Line.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 2/21/2020 11:47:00 PM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/20/2020 11:26:00 PM
Your gripping poem describes the forlornness of grief very well, Line. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/21/2020 6:24:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Evelyn.

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