Deathbed Poetry: Jesus of Nazareth

Deathbed Poetry – Jesus of Nazareth – 10-9-25. “It is finished!”  An elegiac has three parts – grief, praise and comfort.
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Deathbed Poetry - Jesus of Nazareth “It is Finished!”

Only splinters cradle your bloodied face
Shouted curses drown your last words of blessing
Helpless tears, washed in the blood and water of your side,
Mix with the filth of tangled betrayals
Your seamless dignity faces the cruelty of dice
Gamblers with eternity
Raise gall to lips that spoke their creation
The sunless day grieves 
Blind to the perfect prophecy’s fulfillment
All creation bows – wracked with grief 
As angels hover over your sinless hands
Heaven trembles – earth erupts – temples shudder.
“It is Finished!”  Yet, Love always survives.

When you spread out your pierced hands 
Between Eternity and earth
Superstitions and spells flee in vertigo
The last vile breath of time possessed darkness
Screams in writhing whimpers at your gaze
Stumbling into an unresolved infinity
You transcend our rags of shame to raiments
On torrents of your new grace
Holy delight laughs as midnight claims its last echo
In your hands irony transcends to victory
Our tears to triumph in your new Genesis
Where mysteries of a garden materialize.
“It is finished!”  And Love always survives.

Eden’s heart-wrenching elegies of regret
Resolve in a timeless time signature
Chrisms of frankincense erase deep scars
With the anointed balm of forgiveness,
Abandoned ashes gather into endless effervescence
When tempests expire over still waters
And lilies bloom in weeded pastures
Our new lungs sing out aromatic splendor
In refrains of Eden heard again
Joy takes root in the beatitudes of the manger’s Rose
Grace overpowers putrid bondage
As glory's pierced hands
Mend the shredded threads of our brokenness.
 “It is finished!”  Yes!  Love always survives.
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Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 1:34 PM
I am impressed with the dedication to a poem that was probably inspired by spirit yet required your time, thought, effort and dedication. Summed up, loved writing it and revising it until you were fulfilled with the 'trying.' (if like me, you could tweak and tweak w/o end) I would think there's a church, denomination or religious/spiritual publisher somewhere that would love to have this poem.
Carber Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 8:57 AM
A beautiful ode to a man who was killed for the crime of telling us to love God and each other.
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Wow. thus is amazing work. And how you repeated the most important last words: it is finished. In reality. It was all just begun!
George Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 9:07 AM
Dear Sam, l am sure the one who bore all the burden of our sin on His shoulders will definitely be pleased with this tearful tribute you have given to Him. The son of God, forgiving all his tormentors and detractors finally laid his head and breathed his last telling- ' it is finished,' Once more you have brought to life the saga of a great sacrifice that saved humanity from damnation. You have written a masterpiece in your inimitable style. A well deserved win, dear friend.
Anaya Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:56 AM
I cried when I saw " The Passion" epiphany exctacy, a way you know your saved. This masterpiece has brought a tear to my eye. Congratulations on your win Sam. Beautiful words ~Happy all saints day!
Kauffman Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Dear Anaya! Every time I see the movie Jesus of Nazareth, like you, I cry. And, like you I know that without the cross we would have no future. I tried to put all that emotion into this poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on "It Is Finished!" and thank you so much for your congratulations! Happy All Saints and All Souls Day to you.
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:37 AM
Congrats Sam! This is an extraordinary write and Daniel would have found it hard to pick the top prize! I feel this is equally deserving of the top prize! A number of brilliant lines and I love “It is Finished!” Yet, Love always survives. Great write!
Kauffman Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:04 PM
Krish, so good to hear from you! Thank you for your beautiful feedback. I am so honored by Daniel's placement and feel honored to have been given the inspiration to write this poem. It is great consolation to know that indeed love does survive through it all! Sending you blessings of joy!!
Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:02 AM
Dear Sam, Congrats on taking 2nd in my contest. First let me say it is masterfully structured elegiac, grief, praise, and comfort rendered with liturgical precision and lyrical depth. The layering of biblical imagery with metaphysical resonance creates a sense of revelation, where each stanza feels like a movement in a sacred composition. It’s a powerful offering, and one that lingers. Autumn Blessings, Dear Sam, Daniel
Kauffman Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Dear Daniel, I am so honored with your placement of this poem. Thank you. Writing this poem was a journey into a place of meditation and reflections on the saving grace of the cross. I am so grateful for the opportunity to enter this poem in your contest and love writing this new form to me. Sending you blessings of joy, dear friend and fellow pilgrim!!
Alex Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 10:12 PM
"Yes! Love always survives." - A very powerful writing on Jesus.
Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 10:42 PM
Hi Chris! Thank you so much. I so agree. Despite all that our world experiences, love always survives. So appreciate your visit. Sending you blessings!
Grubb Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 5:20 PM
Sam, you have a winner I am sure!! Brilliantly and beautifully done. FAVORITE…
Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 10:40 PM
Thank you so much, Mickey. I am honored by your fav. I think these are the most impactful words in our history. So appreciate your visit and your lovely compliments! Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 12:40 PM
An Amazing Write. Love It... Great Last Line... FAV for me... Have a blessed day writing away..............
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 1:50 PM
Thank you so much, Paula, for sharing in the joy of this poem. So glad you loved the last line! Indeed, it is finished and life has just begun! Blessings of autumn joy to you!
Valles Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 9:39 PM
Glorious. One of the finest works I have ever read. A fav for sure!
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Tom, I am deeply honored and grateful for your beautiful compliments and fav! But, of course I have to give credit to our Eternal muse, the true poet! This poem almost seemed to write itself and that in itself is a blessing! Thank you! You have brightened my day and put a song of gratitude in my heart. Sending blessings of autumn joy!
Hind Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:50 PM
This is so so beautiful, Sam. Makes one look at themselves, and remember...before us, someone else already has taken everything we have been through before us
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige. I have often pondered these last words. They are a central part of the dialogue for my Joanna one woman musical drama. I am so glad you liked this reflection. Sending you blessings and my gratitude.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:42 PM
oh, what a great choice! Wish I'd thought of it...but you did a marvelous job with your poem....the resounding 'It is Finished' brought a feeling of grace to my mind. There's so much to like about this poem...it is certain to be a contest winner. faving
Kauffman Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:04 PM
Sara, thank you so much! I had the same feeling - like everything in history came together in these words spoken from the cross. Nothing left to do. All 151 prophecies fulfilled. So grateful for your beautiful words! Hugs and blessings!!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 2:22 PM
Nice write! Jesus gave His all. We only touch the surface.
Kauffman Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 2:02 PM
Jesus opened gates on hinges that squeaked from lack of use and we are welcome to walk through them into His promises. How blessed are we!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:35 PM
He loves us. Wants us there in paradise. He made a way and I will praise Him for all eternity! God bless you, my brother-in-Christ!
Kauffman Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 3:16 PM
Thank you so much, Kim! Yes he did! I am in awe that Jesus did this for each of us especially knowing the ups and downs of our hearts and our choices! Blessings of joy to you!
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