Death, Where Are You

DEATH, WHERE ARE YOU

Teeter totter renders its slight ups and downs.
Balance of emotions in smiles and frowns.
Temperance of this long life, I’ve been shown.
                    Death, where are you

Cruel times threw me or left me to crash.
I felt forsaken by my fellow man’s trash.
Burned by youth’s mistakes, buried in ash.
                    Death, where are you

Left breathless by my serendipitous life.
Joy in pain. Peace, prayed in oil, chastises strife,
Unfettering forgiveness, as husband and wife.
                    Death, where are you

Destiny hopes for my heavenly home.
Releasing my shame, grace does come.
My soul clings to the rugged cross tome.
                    Death, where are you

4/30/2018
Rhyme and Refrain Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Broken Wings
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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Thank you, Line!
Inman Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 8:31 AM
I like this Kim, it seems to be more of hope for what's to come rather than the desire for the end. Nicely worded.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Yes! Thanks, James!
La France Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Subiml!
Gentry Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this emotional write. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Thanks, Susan!
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Another challenge very well met, Kim. I am going to spend some time sifting through your poems! Have a wonderful Sunday!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Faulkner Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:25 AM
So many amazing lines - but "releasing my shame, grace does come" stands out - good luck in contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle!
Pinet Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM
An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page in quiet acceptance. A well written engrossing poem, filled with sadness, dealing with questions of love, faith and death in a whirl wind of emotions. Well done my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Thanks so much, Emile! xx
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