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Death Unexpected

Ghastly voices I hear in the night shrieking Hallowed death unexpected has struck my friend Only a month hence we were speaking, Who knew soon would come a bitter end Someday, he and I need no longer pretend. written October 21, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/22/2021 12:29:00 AM

I really like the end rhymes you have used here Hank.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2021 10:00:00 AM

Thanks, Caren.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/22/2021 12:23:00 AM

My condolences to you Milton on the loss of your friend. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2021 10:00:00 AM

Tom, the older we get the more we experience the loss of old friends.