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Death Stale Symphony Discount

Written: April 14, 2025  for contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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The subject matter of this poem explores themes of transience, intersection of life and death, and the fragile coexistence of human and natural worlds.

a loaf of discounted bread 
             stale & crumbly
resides in a brown paper bag 
    teetering
         on a park bench

a finger of cool breath

_____nudges
____________the
________________bag
___________________towards

ground

      pile of used cigarettes
  gathered by
a trash
can
&
an
array
  of greasy
      fast food, styrofoam cups

                          a souring banana milkshake
                                              punctured through
                                                    ---a rotting apple
                                                                          core
                                                                                &
                                                                            an
                                                          assemblage
                                          of stale and wizened
                            McDonald's medium fries


family of pigeons
        peck at brown paper
                                  bag--
              it topples over &
         spills its guts
    across 
grass

a swan watches from a pond
                                           --eyes peer--
                         from its snowy face
         water cushions every ounce
      of its body
  caresses every single
feather

sky is a petri-dish 
        c r a m m e d 
              with scarlet c l o u d s 

a young girl falls
               as her size four sneaker
                  is caught
                     on a hidden tree root
                        swan chuckles
                             to itself
                             a college student bites
                        into a decorated
                     hot dog
                 condiments slip
his button-down
      shirt &
a swan extends its wings
a platform for sun
as droplets of
crystalline water
sparkle off surface
of each

feather

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Date: 4/14/2025 7:59:00 PM
Saturated is life, well constructed and delivered, O the price we pay--Very human. I'm excited to see this style, Las ~ ANAYA
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Date: 4/14/2025 11:30:00 AM
A very unique write this is dr sotto, Well written and your lines are so artistically articulated and delivered in a way that catches the eye and soul of the reader! Love the opening lines as its very different and the vivid nature youv painted imagery with such descriptive diction is truly impressive! I love especially lines “ sky is a petri-dish c r a m m e d with scarlet c l o u d s ” beautiful and so creative! As well “ a swan extends its wings a platform for sun” seamless alliterations!! And choice of words! Brilliant ending! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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