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Death Spell Unbound

The sage sits in a denuded forest where ‘green’ foliage once towered

Knots a ‘thread’ of his hair through the eye of the parched pine needle

Of his ‘heart’ that shivers in the ashen lightness of smouldering fires

‘Breathless’ he collects ember before rain sets out to seek its revenge


Lone ‘birds’ shed feathers of dry tears embedded in scorched plumage

‘Fathomless’ they refuse to embrace naked exposure of truthfulness

‘Silence’ grows as they fail to flap wings in futile departure from rage

A ‘beautiful’ landscape has scarpered escape routes barely conceived


One de-rooted ‘hair’ stands out from the skull bone of human inferno

‘Dark’ like lost causes it delivers a savage message to the blinded savant


21st February 2020

Ten word challenge on the theme of death

thread heart silence hair beautiful

dark green birds fathomless breathless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/11/2020 1:42:00 AM
Wonderful win Kai.. You took the contest to a different level creating this vivid imagery..
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Date: 3/11/2020 12:22:00 AM
Kai, this is a powerful witness to the power of words. Congratulations on your win. And thank you for your theme - Clown at the Abyss. I wasn't able to finish an entry in time but did finally complete a poem on the theme. It was truly inspiring.
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Date: 3/10/2020 5:51:00 PM
Kai, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and thanks for taking part _Constance
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