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Death Overrules All Judgments Here On Earth

Blank Verse DEATH OVERRULES ALL JUDGMENTS HERE ON EARTH In reign of terror, split, with holes and pain, the sentinel, distained his fingers black. The pools of sticky-red descend, like mud, and eyes despise the madman’s gaze, above. Where flowers bloomed in glassy panes, sublime, the heart of Vegas shatters - shards of fear. Screams hail, uplift, the crazy bastard’s smile, but, final drift of sand will drown this man. His boat will capsize. Stench of spilt men’s blood will fill his screaming lungs with death’s revenge. White robes attend the march of martyr’s feet, into the pearly gate, with smiling teeth. 10/20/2017 Craig Cornish’s Death Contest

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Date: 11/18/2017 8:10:00 PM
Congrats, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Line!
Date: 11/16/2017 1:53:00 PM
Very dramatic take on this subject matter. Many congrats on your top-notch placement. Sincerely, Elaine
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2017 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine!
Date: 11/14/2017 1:20:00 AM
intense emotions and vivid imagery Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 5:40:00 AM
Thanks James!
Date: 11/13/2017 6:10:00 PM
Very interesting take on this theme Kim. The last couplet paints a vivid picture.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thanks John!
Date: 11/13/2017 1:07:00 PM
Great imagery. Congrats Kim with your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Rob!
Date: 11/13/2017 12:41:00 PM
Truly powerful, congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you D.W.
Date: 11/13/2017 11:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this dramatic poem on modern horror! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 10/20/2017 6:58:00 PM
You most certainly have come up with a judgement and sentence in the afterlife. Very charged with fire. Best wishes for the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2017 6:59:00 PM
Thanks, Janis!
Date: 10/20/2017 10:39:00 AM
Oh, my, Kim, what emotion you have invoked!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2017 1:15:00 PM
Thanks, Sunlite!

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