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Death Overrules All Judgments Here On Earth

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DEATH OVERRULES ALL JUDGMENTS HERE ON EARTH

In reign of terror, split, with holes and pain,
the sentinel, distained his fingers black.

The pools of sticky-red descend, like mud,
and eyes despise the madman’s gaze, above.

Where flowers bloomed in glassy panes, sublime,
the heart of Vegas shatters - shards of fear.

Screams hail, uplift, the crazy bastard’s smile,
but, final drift of sand will drown this man.

His boat will capsize. Stench of spilt men’s blood
will fill his screaming lungs with death’s revenge.

White robes attend the march of martyr’s feet,
into the pearly gate, with smiling teeth.

10/20/2017
Craig Cornish’s Death Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Congrats, Kim. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Thanks Line!
George   Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Very dramatic take on this subject matter. Many congrats on your top-notch placement. Sincerely, Elaine
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 3:11 PM
Thanks, Elaine!
Inman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 1:20 AM
intense emotions and vivid imagery Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 5:40 AM
Thanks James!
Lawless Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:10 PM
Very interesting take on this theme Kim. The last couplet paints a vivid picture.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Thanks John!
Carmack Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:07 PM
Great imagery. Congrats Kim with your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Rob!
Rodgers Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:41 PM
Truly powerful, congrats on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Thank you D.W.
Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:57 AM
Congrats on your win with this dramatic poem on modern horror! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Thank you Janice!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 6:58 PM
You most certainly have come up with a judgement and sentence in the afterlife. Very charged with fire. Best wishes for the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 6:59 PM
Thanks, Janis!
Wanter Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Oh, my, Kim, what emotion you have invoked!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 1:15 PM
Thanks, Sunlite!
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