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Death of the Dream

Where do dreams go if they die? You can't put em in your pocket You can't plant em in the sky. And if you hide em in your heart Then with you they'll surely die. Where do dreams go, can they die? When life just happens You've fallen again and now running blind. An unwilling combatant a greying specter An emotional conscientious objector. A Phoenix rising Icarus hoping to fly Once you dreamed so big You almost kissed the sky. Now all that seems like a faded picture Faith sabotaged by doubt  A deadly elixir. Where do dreams go when they die? Were they actually there Or merely a lie? Did you dream in color or only black and white? Were you alive when you believed? Did you just hang on to the seed? Or by faith let it go Out of your control Yet willing to still believe  That faith will let it grow. Where did your dream go? Is it alive  Or like a mirage in a desert Playing a trick on your eyes? Will you surrender to the camouflage of life? Much like darkness tries to hide the night. A peace treaty with deception Void of light. Where do dreams go when they die?

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Date: 3/1/2014 7:49:00 PM
Dreams are what what give us drive and purpose. Without them we're just merely surviving, or better yet dead. Excellent write!!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 3:46:00 PM
Dreams......without them we become an empty hollow shell. Love the way you have framed this question. Great line: "Will you surrender to the camouflage of life?" Best ,SuZ
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Date: 2/3/2014 3:11:00 PM
If a dream is passed from friend to friend. The dream you dream can have no end.
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:44:00 PM
A fantasy becomes a dream and with only a little head of steam the dream becomes reality ... it we can just cling long enough.
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Date: 1/21/2014 3:53:00 PM
This is a good question and thought... Thank you for sharing Kelly. <3 Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/21/2014 8:45:00 AM
I really like this poem. I sometimes feel like this too. Even wrote a few poems recently with a theme similar to this. I hope you are ok because you did not say anything at your blog!! HOpe to see more of you!
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:39:00 AM
Great poem here, Kelly.
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Date: 1/19/2014 10:01:00 PM
Dreams never die, just the dreamer. The dreams sparkle and someone else notices and picks them up. I like the line "faith sabatoged by doubt" this is a very well expressed piece.
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Date: 1/17/2014 9:38:00 PM
Dreams are as mortal as the dreamers. This was a pleasure to read.
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Kelly Crenshaw
Date: 1/17/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thnx!! Very much appreciate the comment

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