Death of the Dream

Where do dreams go if they die?
You can't put em in your pocket
You can't plant em in the sky.
And if you hide em in your heart
Then with you they'll surely die.
Where do dreams go, can they die?
When life just happens
You've fallen again and now running blind.
An unwilling combatant a greying specter 
An emotional conscientious objector.
A Phoenix rising
Icarus hoping to fly
Once you dreamed so big
You almost kissed the sky.
Now all that seems like a faded picture
Faith sabotaged by doubt 
A deadly elixir.
Where do dreams go when they die?
Were they actually there
Or merely a lie?
Did you dream in color or only black and white?
Were you alive when you believed?
Did you just hang on to the seed?
Or by faith let it go
Out of your control
Yet willing to still believe 
That faith will let it grow.
Where did your dream go?
Is it alive 
Or like a mirage in a desert
Playing a trick on your eyes?
Will you surrender to the camouflage of life?
Much like darkness tries to hide the night.
A peace treaty with deception
Void of light.
Where do dreams go when they die?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Barnett Avatar
March 1, 2014 at 7:49 PM
Dreams are what what give us drive and purpose. Without them we're just merely surviving, or better yet dead. Excellent write!!!
Delaney Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 3:46 PM
Dreams......without them we become an empty hollow shell. Love the way you have framed this question. Great line: "Will you surrender to the camouflage of life?" Best ,SuZ
Watson Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 3:11 PM
If a dream is passed from friend to friend. The dream you dream can have no end.
Ruff Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 9:44 PM
A fantasy becomes a dream and with only a little head of steam the dream becomes reality ... it we can just cling long enough.
A  Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 3:53 PM
This is a good question and thought... Thank you for sharing Kelly. <3 Love ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:45 AM
I really like this poem. I sometimes feel like this too. Even wrote a few poems recently with a theme similar to this. I hope you are ok because you did not say anything at your blog!! HOpe to see more of you!
Hunter Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Great poem here, Kelly.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 10:01 PM
Dreams never die, just the dreamer. The dreams sparkle and someone else notices and picks them up. I like the line "faith sabatoged by doubt" this is a very well expressed piece.
Pettit Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Dreams are as mortal as the dreamers. This was a pleasure to read.
Crenshaw Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Thnx!! Very much appreciate the comment
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