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Death of Love Part 1

~Death Of Love~ Part 1

The death of adoration is the moment of truth
                  abundance of caution is needed
                            when love has no tomorrow
                                            it changes to pain.
                                                   In the name of suffering 
                                                          weight your capacity to hold tight
                                                                             by not giving up the fight.
.                                                                                                 
                                                                            Therese Bacha      
                                                                               12/5/2013
                                                                Contest for Russel Divey 5 minute
                                                                                  WIN. NO.( 1)

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Debbie Duncan Date: 6/26/2013 11:07:00 PM hello Terry ,, how are you ;} I say there is always hope for love ;} Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/26/2013 11:15:00 PM Hi Debbie, thank you. It is true, there is always a way to stay in love. Hugs Terry. xoxo

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 6/9/2013 8:04:00 AM Terry, you captured the pain of love loss amazingly. Congrats on this awesome win and write. Hugs Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 6/26/2013 11:14:00 PM Hi Cecilia, love your name. Thank you so much for passing by. Terry xoxo

Honestly J.T. Date: 5/21/2013 11:04:00 AM never give up hope. keep moving forward - JH Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/21/2013 11:54:00 AM Thank you, no we always must keep our hope. Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/20/2013 5:46:00 AM - Lovely created, but very sad - never lose hope and love. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/20/2013 8:30:00 AM Hello again dearest Anne, without Hope, we would never have survived our pain. I am so happy you enjoyed reading even with the sadness. Love T.

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/19/2013 2:36:00 PM Simple and beautiful. Many congrats to you on your win. AO Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/20/2013 8:28:00 AM Hello AO, Your sharing with faithfulness always, makes me a happy mum, thank you so much. I will see you soon. Love Terry xoxo

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/18/2013 8:59:00 PM Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/19/2013 7:54:00 AM Thank you PD, miracles do happen here when each writer receives lots of appreciation on there poems? they get encouraged. Your contests have a lot to do with that to PD. Love T.

Michael Kirby Date: 5/16/2013 11:49:00 AM Nice, I love the line: when love has no tommorow. Thank you. Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/16/2013 1:22:00 PM Hello handsome young man, thank you so much for your sharing compliments. I will go and find you. Love Terry xoxo

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/16/2013 11:27:00 AM Truthful work that you have penned for the contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..And written in such a short time...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my work "As"..Sara Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/16/2013 1:20:00 PM Hi Sara, i am trying to change from very long poems, to shorter ones. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo

Skat A Date: 5/15/2013 11:17:00 AM A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/15/2013 11:27:00 AM Hello, thank you for passing by. Love Terry xoxo

Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/15/2013 1:03:00 AM The world is an empty place when the love escapes. words nicely lined up enjoy thanks for your encouraging comments on my poem Love manel Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/15/2013 9:04:00 AM Hi Manel nice to meet you, your poems are so well written, thank you for dropping by. We will meet again. Love and being in love keeps me healthy. So i wish that to you to. Love Terry xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2013 11:39:00 AM - Words of truth, in a very well written poem my friend Terry. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/14/2013 11:48:00 AM Hello Anne, thank yo so much, its always so nice and comforting you see you. My faithful friend. Love Terry xoxo

Bernard Colasurdo Date: 5/14/2013 10:11:00 AM Hi Terry great job especially for the 5 min. timeline. Good luck in the contest. You should be proud of yourself. Hugs to you. Check your Soup Mail : ) Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/14/2013 11:49:00 AM Hi Bernard. Thank you for your respect, hope to hear from you soon. Love Terry xoxoox Take care.

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/12/2013 5:30:00 PM Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Your presence at my work is always encouraging to me..Sara Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/12/2013 5:39:00 PM Hi Sara, its so so sweet of you to feel that way about me, i will visit you promise always. Take care, we are friends here. Sara, you can write to me at soup mail, as i don't know how to do it yet. Once you write to me i would keep your name and answer back. Love Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/12/2013 3:38:00 AM Words of wisdom wrapped in a verse of pain! Happy mother’s day! Login to Reply Therese Bacha Date: 5/12/2013 7:19:00 AM Thank you so much Demetrios. Today i am going to church as my younger brother passed away in Lebanon 40 days ago. I am so sad. But this is God`s will. Thank you for remaining my friend. Love Terry xoxo