Death of Drowning

Shallow waters but deep oceans,
She sinks in his arms like the Titanic.

Asking for a second,
To dive into the eye,
That the welcome makes her levitate.

Drowning under the cold waters,
Staying 10000 days under the sun.

Allow me in,
For your arms so cold.
In the hot summer,
The breeze turns cold.

Nothing's much worse,
That see you leave.
For my Arctic circle,
Curls always, back to you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Yezh Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Hey! Thank you very much for your for your comment! Really appreciate it :))
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