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Living each day all alone Even though I'm surrounded by millions of people, I still feel in isolation. 
I am surrounded by the nothing, i am the Nothing!
Deep inside, I feel rotten to the core,
Skin shedding,like the devil is devouring me!
I feel that life's oils are draining from me,
Seeping through my vein's,
No light within me, darkness has took it's toll,
How do I break it's grasp.
Energy is draining, yet a spark ignites inside me,
My soul will win out,
I will fight with each and every breath I take.
The darkness will become light once again.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 1/31/2016 7:17:00 PM
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Date: 4/12/2014 8:25:00 PM
Great write love the way you combine the solitude With death...... Gina
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Amelie Starr
Date: 8/7/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Gina its due to my battle with depression
Date: 4/12/2014 5:01:00 PM
Fabulous description Amelie really enjoyed your first poem. Hugs Jan x
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Amelie Starr
Date: 8/7/2014 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Jan x
Date: 4/10/2014 5:52:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Amelie :) - I choose your first moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/10/2014 1:33:00 AM
Nice poem with simplicity and careful selected words for easy comprehension. Great work keep it up.
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Date: 4/9/2014 10:14:00 PM
Amelie, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/9/2014 4:55:00 PM
Amelie, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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