Death of An Irishman

It feels good to put the axe down and head in from the scrub
to spend a piece of time with mates on Fridays in the pub
and yarn about the week that’s gone, with an elbow on the bar;
listen to the idle gossip and hear who was the star.

From the corner of the mouth in a whisper hard to hear,
there’s stories of the wayward folk with tongues loosened by the beer.
Whether they be true or not is no concern for anyone;
it’s shocking if the rumours wrong with what damage can be done.

Other stories come to light, about hard times that someone had.
Because they don’t titillate the mind and because they’re only sad,
few want to hear my story; less would probably understand,
how I should have read the signs that destroyed an Irishman.
*          *          *          *          *
I glanced with little pity at the hearse and who’s behind.        
This cavalcade of mourning stuck loosely on my mind
as I watched the Priest who followed, and one man who walked alone.
I wondered who had left us, until the Priest spoke to us at home.

“So sad” the Father said - “She was the mourner’s wife.
The poor mother of three children who died when giving life.
They migrated here from Ireland with no work and naught for rent.
They’ve been living near the river; the whole family in one tent.”

With sullen face the Father spoke “There’s two boys and a little girl”.
‘Adams apple’ moving up and down, he spoke of harshness in this world,
until finally he got around to alleviate his bother.	
We took the little red haired girl - my ‘Els’ became her mother.
*          *          *          *          *
A saddened Dad, lad on each knee, tears rolling down his cheek.
He motioned us to wait a while for he found it hard to speak.
Beneath his bed from an old trunk he held a needle and some thread,
plied to the hem of a tiny dress by the woman who’s now dead.

“Your little boys!” Elsie asked - for some time the tent went quiet.
He said he’d get some work soon so the boys would be all right.
For weeks we never saw him. Elsie spoke of this concerned.
He had not come to see his daughter who still for her mother yearned.
*          *          *          *          *
One Friday night I questioned friends, as we gathered in the pub.
I asked them about the Irishman. They said ‘he’s in the scrub’.
He can’t get work, lord how he’s tried; of late he’s been downhearted.
I felt I should check his welfare so from the pub departed.

The boys, unkempt and hungry - ‘Three days’ they said their Dad had gone.
Alone in the open bush they waited until I had come along.
“Coo-ee!” I called; searched scrub surrounds; smelt an odour in the air …
finally I found the Irishman - a gun lay beside him there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/25/2017 2:03:00 AM
This was a real tear jerker for me Lindsay. Beautifully written as all your poems are. Where are you? I hope you are well. Missing you....Blessings, Connie : )
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Date: 5/29/2016 4:51:00 PM
OH MY, instead of the usual punchline I was waiting for, I got a punch of sadness!! A sad sad tale, Lindsay and it could very well happen to a man who relies a lot on his wife and then loses her! Good one.
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea ... yes I'm back and I'll catch up with your work soon. I suppose this verse explains how fragile we can be when a piece of family life goes missing - Lindsay
Date: 5/29/2016 7:28:00 AM
Oh what a sad tale and ending, Lindsay! The death of a loved one and the inability to find work and be the 'proper' father figure must have taken their toll. Great storytelling and top marks to you, as usual! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:54:00 PM
G'day Paul ... thanks once again for your kind comment Paul. Times certainly must have been hard back in those depression years - Lindsay
Date: 5/29/2016 4:35:00 AM
You certainly know how to keep a captive audience hooked throughout, Lindsay. Fascinating read as always. My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:57:00 PM
Hello John ... thank you very much for your positive comment John. I do appreciate it - Lindsay
Date: 5/29/2016 3:07:00 AM
Lindsay: Such a sad tale related in your usual sympathetic way. A true bush poet...that's you. I can hear it being told around many a campfire. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:11:00 PM
G'day Suzanne ... dunno about a true bush poet but if I do happen to hear an interesting yarn, I prefer to pass it on in poetic form - thanks again Suzanne - Lindsay
Date: 5/29/2016 1:36:00 AM
A sobering poem Lindsay, But it was a well set up story and your wonderful rhythm flows throughout.. Great write
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:15:00 PM
G'day Mark ... yes it is very sobering and true too often. Thank you once again Mark - Lindsay
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