Death of An Immortal

I was born in a time
When the thrills of a thriller
Did move the bricks
Of the thickest of walls.

I grew in an era
When the dynasty of an empire
Did expand to farthest of lands.

I adapted to a phenomenon
When the existence of a legend
Did drown the fame of mortals.

A fame in immortality
Bearing the impenetrability
Of Achilles himself,
Destined to march
Through the walls of Troy.

I twisted to the strings
Of a guitar, twanging
Spontaneously in my head,
In moves of invisibility.

I was opportune to appear
In a time, when the conquest
Of one king, did crest
Long lasting tattoos
In the hearts of many.

I was fascinated in a time
When the life within a man
Did blossom young,
As he lived unaffected
By the fading of time.

I lingered in an era
When the voice of one man
Could unify the sections
In a complex world.

I flowed in his guidance,
Dined in his glory
As though I existed
In his peak of enthronement,
His conferment of Grammies.

Bedazzled by his flexibility,
I was blessed by his power
To rein in anointed glory,
Unending immortality.

I was born in an empire
Governed by a king;
The king of pop,
A king in the world,
Father of offspring
As multiple as stars.

Electrified by a star,
There shall never be another;
Another motion slider,
Another shining star.

And though he passes on,
I shall live to declare
That I was born in a time
Ruled by a legend,
Guided by an immortal,
A world of Michael Jackson.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/23/2009 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Dowell and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:36:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:59:00 PM
Very nice ballad. Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Dowell! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:49:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/24/2009 3:02:00 PM
Nice tribute to Michael. Hopefully, he will find the peace that eluded him in this world. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/24/2009 10:05:00 AM
Awesome tribute here, Dowell to a man who was definitely a product of our time ... wounded children seem to abound in our world in much greater numbers every day, and Michael epitomized an abused child. Its a sad commentary on our humanness. Well, enough of my blather ... smile ... congratulations on having your writing featured this week here at the Soup!!
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Date: 10/23/2009 10:13:00 AM
Dear Dowell, Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry this week. Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Dowell. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:58:00 AM
This is wonderful. I really like the intermittent rhyming pattern and the flow of the poem. It reads like magic. Welcome to poetrysoup. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:54:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Dowell. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:41:00 PM
I'm pleased to be the first to comment on this wonderful piece! What a fantastic tribute to Michael. Thanks for sharing your gift with us. Welcome to the SOUP! Donna
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