Death of An Agoraphobic

I awoke in a half dead state.
Senses crippled with no thoughts.
I lay alone, in an empty space.
The nothingness lasts until I peel open my eyes.
Without warning bursts of light pierce my soul as the colours in my world overflow.
That empty state was live and new, a brilliant sight that slowly grew.
I throw open my door, and my senses are assaulted with life.
A spectrum of sounds and a swirl of smells collide.
I can feel the world, as I stand in my doorway.
A bleak existence that now has meaning.
I can feel.
The warmth of the sun beats down.
The gentle touch of the wind exhilarates me.
I am lost in time, with no need to find my way.
I can see the leaves on the trees flitter.
The windows of the cars flicker with reflected light.
I dare myself, and close my eyes, leaving the beautiful sensations.
All I can do is breath, and now I feel alive.
I fall back, and land on the grass.
With eyes closed I feel the hundreds of blades, fresh, and new.
I can feel, and I am alive.

Alex Gladu
A Feeling of Hope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 2:06 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Great feeling to have_"HOPE"..Way to go with this win..Congrats.Sara
A  Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 6:10 PM
ALEX, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
Johnson Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 10:17 AM
A lovely state to find yourself in. I hope it has lasted. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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April 16, 2014 at 9:54 AM
Hi Alex, a wonderful poem, deep...Congratulations, it was nice seeing Donald here on the soup today, he's took a long, long vacation. Leaving this contest, hanging. Glad to see it finally out. Your placement in his contest, rocks... xox~ Linda
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