Death of a Star

It seemed so long ago, my star was born
Pure white brilliance, blinding and warm
A beauty unrivaled by queens and kings
Even more fair than Saturn's rings

Pulled into orbit against my will
I was shaken and given more than my fill
There I was plucked from my Pleiades
Lightened and darkened and brought to my knees

So when did it all go so wrong
The starting of a mighty collision
Who silenced the sonorous song
And first foresaw this asteroidal vision

Was it Sagittarius's sharp arrow
Or Electra, my own sister star
Do I dare pick up the nebular bow
And battle this fearsome quasar

The galaxies began at once to collide 
Gravitationally turned with nowhere to hide
My clear, radiant star fought at my right arm
Struggled and warred to inflict lasting harm

But the loathsome rival was too strong
The fray too immense, too harsh and too long
Luminosity of my star was brighter than the sun
And then came the explosion, the evil deed was done

It seemed so long ago, my star was born
Pure white brilliance, blinding and warm
A beauty unrivaled by queens and kings
Even more fair than Saturn's rings

Now I'm iced over, my flame turned blue
I'm moved aside and left in the view
Swallowed and shadowed, mourning my star's dark death
Left in its place, a black hole loved nonetheless.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/18/2012 3:43:00 PM
I love your poem, Aimee!!! Keep writing more!!! Love you!!! :D
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Date: 8/3/2011 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Aimee. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2009 6:03:00 AM
Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you AIMEE
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:48:00 PM
Almee, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/7/2009 9:05:00 AM
Love your rhyme. It is very descriptive with very good use of your interlect. Sara
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Date: 7/7/2009 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem great flow well done! Laura :)
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Aimee. Fasinating writing. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. I enjoyed reading it. Ernilando
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Date: 7/5/2009 7:35:00 PM
Congrates on being featured this week ... Loved this one ... Love Jayne x x
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Date: 5/24/2009 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/23/2009 11:41:00 PM
Aimee, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations Aimee on "Death of a Star" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:46:00 PM
Aimee, this is a magnificent poem. Science never sounded so beautiful. Of course, we all know that it is beautiful to see. You have made it beautiful to hear about. God Bless you. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:42:00 AM
This is a great piece. I love the imagery and flow of rhymes. Great lyrics, lovely message. Please keep writing. Hope to read it again to get more insight. Love Leke
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:05:00 PM
Wonderful, exciting and the imagery spectacular. Congrats on being feature this week. Excellent poem.
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Date: 5/19/2009 2:31:00 PM
Brilliant poem Aimee, well done on being featured, James
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Date: 5/19/2009 12:56:00 PM
Wow Great write! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/19/2009 12:21:00 PM
Congrats to you on your feature poem this week, well done! Rgds, E
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Date: 5/18/2009 7:51:00 AM
I think this is great, you can feel the helplessness
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:32:00 AM
Hello, congratulations on being featured this week. More power and honor. Ernilando
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:42:00 AM
This is an excellent submission. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to poetry Soup. ~Joseph
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