Constance La France Poet Light Verse

Death of a Hummer- Ct

O, I Remember
    You Broke my Heart
'In the Garden'
        My Tranquil Garden
At My Garden End

'O, Sweet Hummer'
        Falling, Falling, Falling
 " and angels wept"
     O, Why, Why, Why

Hollow, Hollow Inside
   O, my broken heart   
                  Death Is Cruel
O, the hurt
             In My Heart
    O, the pain    "I weep"

             She Lays In Repose

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July 2, 2019


Poetry/Light Verse/Death of a Hummer
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1163-708-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Collaboration of Your Titles
sponsor, Charles Messina

Second Place

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Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2019 at 9:05 AM Great job Constance, congrats.

Charles Messina July 15, 2019 at 3:26 AM Dear Heart, this poem touched me. Now that I see the picture of the humming bird it even touches me more. Funny, I just saw a humming bird this weekend while on vacation (It's the first time I ever saw one in real life) Great job collaborating your titles into this wonderful poem. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Charlie

Andrea Dietrich July 4, 2019 at 7:57 PM wow, you did an amazing job with your titles. I have so many I could use, I think that will make it even harder. haha!!

Joseph May July 4, 2019 at 7:29 PM A sad poem but well done DH..

Caren Krutsinger July 4, 2019 at 11:09 AM So sad is this poem and yet so gloriously written, my friend!

Lindsay Laurie July 3, 2019 at 7:21 PM Hello Dear Heart … always sad when something that brings so much joy is gone. The feeling in your poem shows this - thank you Dear Heart - Lindsay

Jan Allison July 2, 2019 at 6:41 PM beautiful with your trademark sadness Constance, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France July 2, 2019 at 6:53 PM Jan, thanks for visiting, oh gosh it is sad !