Death Looms

He's courageous as he moves night and day,
Creating fear in hearts and force few to pray,
High or low he cares not,you have to pay,
Debts of many years which you can't delay,
Walks in darkness and twilight without ray,
Prepare your grave and ready to decay.

8-29-2019
Contest:Writing challenge 4,August 2019-six lines sponsored by Dear heart.
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La France Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 3:48 PM
Olyusegun, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this fine Monorhyme poem, deep and dark just the way I like it ~
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 5:39 PM
you gave me chills Olusegun! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Olusegun :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcgee Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 12:19 PM
a great win. Congrats.
Chiri Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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