Death Is Kind

To my grieving friend....

Tell me—
What is death, oh grieving friend?

As we plummet in the midst of perversion and strife
Energy drained from the hardships of life
We lose our sense of being—we subside
We gaze upon the peace of graves—death is kind

Engraved upon the oldest stones we read “Rest in Peace”
And as the days go by it seems the pain will never cease
And as those days Die
For the living—death is kind

Why then, Life, do you torture us so?
Are you waiting for the day when we’ll let you go?
Fleeting…fading…see us unwind
Time and Life seem so unkind
As if—they have left our souls behind

Tell me—what is death?
And what of Life, oh doubtful friend?

Our souls shimmer upon the stones
With all the deceased we can’t feel alone
Freedom seeps through these eternal beds
For the gift of life will find its end

Meanwhile, we’ll just wait for the day
When pain will subside and peace will stay
And rotting centuries later—you will surely find
That—yes! Death is truly, sincerely kind

So—I implore you, my shady friend
Allow this life to find its end
Don’t lose yourself—the grieving must cease
Just let him Rest in Peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Walterhouse Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Beautiful
Bordner Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:40 AM
Oh my Gothic Princess, no one gives such remorseless scrutiny to sorrow like you...its darkly attractive to me, I love the way you confront life, its bold and sexy. Classic tempo and rhyme herein, " Our souls shimmer upon the stones, with all the deceased we can't feel alone..." great work! Happy Valentine's Day beautiful Laura...Justin
David Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 2:04 AM
Beautiful, congratulations!!
Cunningham Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 11:12 PM
I hope to see.. Incredible write.. Thanks, TC
Esquire Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 5:47 AM
Dear Laura, Wow!! very Deep POEM I have many POEMS about Death as I Lost my Wife on our Everlasting Wedding day If YOU want Could YOU read My Series of POEMS ; "The Heart of a POET - Speaks" a four part Series with an Epilog With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... HG
Wayne Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Fantastic poem...but I think life is the gift. I do not view death as kind....unless someone is in great suffering.
Breidenthal Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Ah, I see. In this poem both life and death are both equally and harmoniously a gift. Just accepting the gift of death is a far difficult path to dwell on or take.
Doreus Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 4:13 AM
Wow... i wrote a poem like this before... same title and everything...
Breidenthal Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Really?? I'd love to see it. That's...strange.O.o
Peranteau Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:35 AM
Reeeeeeeed'n....Hey, impressive writes ! Be wit ya soon.......
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Very sad and touchy expressions on death, Laura
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