Death In the Sun

Under a scorching sun
      Death’s vultures circle
    Casting shadows on the
      Marketplace below

    The lively market
     Now hushed as 
    Death’s agents flit in and out
     Like flies over a corpse 

    Eyes turn downwards 
     Idle chattering stops 
    As death can be just
     A whisper away

    A child laughs oblivious
     To danger
    Innocent in a land
     Fragmented by war

    All for God 
     And all for country
    Both sides steeped in blood
     Of slaughtered children 

   The rights of a human
    Wither and die
   In the shade of 
    The poppy harvest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Nice write, but depressing.
Jackson Avatar
January 23, 2014 at 11:05 AM
I tried to write a poem about the atmosphere in Afghanistan and how people live. I hope I came close. Best wishes, Linda x
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