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Pattering rain shattering on grey road With grisly green umbrella she troad In a black attire looking ghostly white Her red woeful eyes sending fearful jilt. Watery moon painting yellowish lips Frozen fear dancing on pink finger tips Her flowing hair sweeping pain of ashes An orange lamp blinking passing wishes. Violet blooms falling from whining trees Covering brown earth - a graveyard in pleas Ah nature, dull and dreary, standing still Her fervid eloquence under blue spill. My canary cage cried a fearful moan While eyes shifted, into thin air she gone. Third Place in STRAND PICK 8,any theme,any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/13/2020 1:22:00 PM
hello Jenish Somadas, tis is a great imagery poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/14/2020 8:31:00 AM
Hello Jenish Somadas, you are welcome. Stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/13/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thank you Darlene for your delightful comment.. Stay safe..
Date: 4/14/2020 2:16:00 PM
Your imagery terrific; superior to the photo which is marvelous.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/15/2020 12:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.. Takecare..
Date: 4/12/2020 9:26:00 PM
Beautiful Poem Jenish I felt like I was looking out of a rain-splattered window that blurred my vision so I could not see clearly all that was going on outside. I saw colour and shapes Blossom falling from trees and felt sad and trapped inside even though I was not in chains. I love this poem it made me think ...Thank you
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/13/2020 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Shirley for your kind support.. Takecare always..
Date: 4/12/2020 10:42:00 AM
Superb poetry, divinely written, Jenish.Your lines are most eloquent, my friend. I hope all is well. JC Hawkens
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/12/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Hawkens for your delightful words..Takecare..
Date: 4/11/2020 4:18:00 PM
Great poem, you brought me right there. Good job
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/11/2020 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Mark for your kind comment..Takecare..
Date: 4/11/2020 3:46:00 PM
Very well written Jenish :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/11/2020 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.. Takecare..
Date: 4/11/2020 9:54:00 AM
Superb verse my friend...keep up the great work Jenish...stay safe and Happy Easter coming...^WW^ :o)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/11/2020 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior.. Takecare and Happy Easter..
Date: 4/11/2020 6:57:00 AM
Good imagery of death in disguise--I liked the flow of your poem, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/11/2020 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Vijay..
Date: 4/11/2020 5:41:00 AM
A captivating poem wonderfully written dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx and blessings .
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/11/2020 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios..