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For contest by Rick Parise

blue breeze rides brown leaves falling down as if dancing upon icy ground

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2024 11:00:00 PM

Big congrats, Karen. The imagery in line one is amazing

Karen Jones
Date: 12/13/2024 12:18:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Crystol Woods

Date: 12/10/2024 10:54:00 AM

Lovely haiku Karen! Congratulations! Xo

Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 11:16:00 AM

Thanks

Arlo Parker

Date: 12/9/2024 11:09:00 AM

Winner!!! Shivers delight, K. :o))

Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 2:06:00 PM

Thanks Argo!

Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 2:05:00 PM

Thanks Argo!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2024 7:55:00 AM

Love the layering of thought, colors and weather! Congrats, Karen!

Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Kim!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2024 11:37:00 PM

I love the subtle use of alliterations in your first line and also how this flows so well dear beautiful poetic soul! You have done a very picturesque haiku too! Well done! Congratulations on your placement. Pleasure always reading your work

Karen Jones
Date: 12/8/2024 11:44:00 PM

Thank you you are so sweet to say Inky!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/8/2024 7:45:00 PM

icy ground dance it is, congratulations on your winning haiku dear poet friend. Cheers!!!

Karen Jones
Date: 12/8/2024 11:11:00 PM

Winning? lol I didn’t know. Thanks

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/3/2024 6:10:00 AM

Karen, great description of the end of fall and the cold weather that's part of it now.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/3/2024 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Duke!

Maria Williams

Date: 12/2/2024 1:10:00 AM

Oh my goodness it must be winter already LOL - Nice Haiku Dear Karen. We have entered summer here in our 'down under' country. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs Maria

Karen Jones
Date: 12/2/2024 1:14:00 AM

Thanks! Wow! Yes it is in the 20s and windy in the mornings this week and the leaves grieve. Is it very hot there now?