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For contest by Rick Parise

blue breeze rides brown leaves falling down as if dancing upon icy ground

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Date: 12/12/2024 11:00:00 PM
Big congrats, Karen. The imagery in line one is amazing
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/13/2024 12:18:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 12/10/2024 10:54:00 AM
Lovely haiku Karen! Congratulations! Xo
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/10/2024 11:16:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 12/9/2024 11:09:00 AM
Winner!!! Shivers delight, K. :o))
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Argo!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 2:05:00 PM
Thanks Argo!
Date: 12/9/2024 7:55:00 AM
Love the layering of thought, colors and weather! Congrats, Karen!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/9/2024 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 12/8/2024 11:37:00 PM
I love the subtle use of alliterations in your first line and also how this flows so well dear beautiful poetic soul! You have done a very picturesque haiku too! Well done! Congratulations on your placement. Pleasure always reading your work
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/8/2024 11:44:00 PM
Thank you you are so sweet to say Inky!
Date: 12/8/2024 7:45:00 PM
icy ground dance it is, congratulations on your winning haiku dear poet friend. Cheers!!!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/8/2024 11:11:00 PM
Winning? lol I didn’t know. Thanks
Date: 12/3/2024 6:10:00 AM
Karen, great description of the end of fall and the cold weather that's part of it now.
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Date: 12/3/2024 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Duke!
Date: 12/2/2024 1:10:00 AM
Oh my goodness it must be winter already LOL - Nice Haiku Dear Karen. We have entered summer here in our 'down under' country. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs Maria
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/2/2024 1:14:00 AM
Thanks! Wow! Yes it is in the 20s and windy in the mornings this week and the leaves grieve. Is it very hot there now?

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