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Death By One

you are my disease, that rots within me, you are the pain, in the bottom of my foot, you are my finger nail, that is ripped from my finger, you are the fat, that clogs my veins from blood, you are the green crap, growing on my scar, you are the blade, that i cut myself at night with, you are the smoke that, fills my lungs and turns them black, but the end is always the same YOU KILL ME! JH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/9/2010 12:31:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:36:00 AM
Wow! That must be a really bad person. Could this person possibly be a wizard? Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:14:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jason. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2010 4:49:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup - interesting poem, I enjoyed reading it, make me wonder who the 'you' character is...
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Date: 6/8/2010 11:27:00 PM
nice write
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Date: 6/8/2010 6:46:00 PM
Deep write you have here... enjoyed...p.d.
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