Death By Manatee

An “Angel of the Odd” curiosity provokes
The Angel of Death is more welcome than he
Wine bottles in a keg?  What is it this angel smokes?
“The narrator’s house,” says Poe with wicked glee

Things are never as they seem in Poe’s fantasy
Much as in life, we trade one monster for the next
And for unlucky blokes, there’s no amnesty
So listen for Poe’s laugh when you feel vexed

Oddities abound in a world with no rules
Poe has no patience for “sensible” solutions
An angel he creates to make men seem fools
Perhaps you’re next in line for this angel’s executions

Who would be so brazen as to poke fun at Poe?
Even as Poe toys with your sanity
You may find yourself fleeing the Kraken in a hoe
Only to be swallowed by a fierce manatee



*Written February 15, 2014 for Craig Cornish’s “Angel of the Odd” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Jerden Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Great images, rhyme and meter! Welcome back and congratulations on the win!
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March 10, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Hi, Congrats on your win. Made a lot of sense in this crazy world of shadows and hobgoblins. Devilishly thought provoking. Well done. Regards Theresa x
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:14 PM
Brilliant write on the Angel of the Odd. Congrats on a fine win, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 6:19 PM
It is such a pleasure to see your poem, Carolyn! We have missed you greatly, and hope you are well! Congratulations on a well-deserved win!!
Harper Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Carolyn, enjoyable fun with this wonderful poem, congratulations on your win!
Makama Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
Collins Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 8:43 AM
So if this doesn't win, it would be a travesty. I love Poe and am sure he wouldn't mind. I'm sure he's happy now with a good sense of humor. love, Kathy
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February 17, 2014 at 12:08 AM
This is surely a fine example of an "Angel of the Odd" my friend! It's so nice to see you again Carolyn! What a brilliant write, I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! Great Work!!
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