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Death By Manatee

An “Angel of the Odd” curiosity provokes The Angel of Death is more welcome than he Wine bottles in a keg? What is it this angel smokes? “The narrator’s house,” says Poe with wicked glee Things are never as they seem in Poe’s fantasy Much as in life, we trade one monster for the next And for unlucky blokes, there’s no amnesty So listen for Poe’s laugh when you feel vexed Oddities abound in a world with no rules Poe has no patience for “sensible” solutions An angel he creates to make men seem fools Perhaps you’re next in line for this angel’s executions Who would be so brazen as to poke fun at Poe? Even as Poe toys with your sanity You may find yourself fleeing the Kraken in a hoe Only to be swallowed by a fierce manatee *Written February 15, 2014 for Craig Cornish’s “Angel of the Odd” contest

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Date: 3/14/2014 1:12:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2014 3:20:00 PM
Great images, rhyme and meter! Welcome back and congratulations on the win!
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Date: 3/10/2014 5:48:00 AM
Hi, Congrats on your win. Made a lot of sense in this crazy world of shadows and hobgoblins. Devilishly thought provoking. Well done. Regards Theresa x
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:14:00 PM
Brilliant write on the Angel of the Odd. Congrats on a fine win, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2014 6:19:00 PM
It is such a pleasure to see your poem, Carolyn! We have missed you greatly, and hope you are well! Congratulations on a well-deserved win!!
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:25:00 PM
Carolyn, enjoyable fun with this wonderful poem, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/28/2014 10:48:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/24/2014 8:43:00 AM
So if this doesn't win, it would be a travesty. I love Poe and am sure he wouldn't mind. I'm sure he's happy now with a good sense of humor. love, Kathy
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Date: 2/17/2014 12:08:00 AM
This is surely a fine example of an "Angel of the Odd" my friend! It's so nice to see you again Carolyn! What a brilliant write, I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! Great Work!!
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