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Death by drowning

Thrust of lust, in form of dust, spawns storm of dark deeds unjust and greed we breed, drags soul down in fears, where we drown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/14/2023 4:27:00 PM
Your poem spoke to me of the perils of lust and greed and how even our fears can drown our souls. Must fave this one. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/14/2023 5:46:00 PM
Indeed, we must and should transcend all our fears. Fear of abandonment, poverty, illness, death or whatever. Of ourself, rational fears are useful, don’t jump into a lion’s cage!

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