Premiere Contest WinnerDeath Bed Poetry: Vincent Van Gogh

Chases me down a paint-stained alley.
My feet are swollen—maybe someday they’ll rot
Exhausted from the brush stroke agony 
I seize when the light forces itself upon me 
When will I decide to turn myself into dust
Deranged is what I seem to be
They locked me in a rage-filled scene
Hearing petrified, hate-charged screams.
Peering through the curtains as I wake from restless sleep
Staring at a starry night
It sings me a melodic, stunning melody
Maybe the air that flows through my lungs
Perhaps the heart that pumps my blood
Is not what I truly need

Maybe a pistol will give me ultimate peace
Perhaps a bullet will allow me to foresee
As I lay near my brother
I don't sob, I don't plead
The life I lived wasn't for me

“The sadness will last forever”
It won't be cured by remedies
So I must cut short my legacy
The rope that strangled me with miseries 
My death is not a tragedy
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Date: 11/9/2025 5:18:00 AM
He suffered so. My nephew too. Serious personalities. Still, Van Gogh had a gift and he brought us a starry night and beautiful sunflowers. Loved your write! Congrats on your win, Iza!
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Date: 11/4/2025 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Iza. Your expression of Van Gogh's suffering reaches the apex of poetic artistry with sharp images. Welcome to the soup! Nice to meet you. Blessings!
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Date: 11/1/2025 9:31:00 AM
Brilliant write and congrats for the top prize and for POTD! you have created such a wonderful imagery of the great artist and his suffering soul and his suicidal thoughts! amazing work!! Love it totally!!
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Date: 11/1/2025 8:40:00 AM
Nice win Iza. Rah
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Date: 11/5/2025 4:20:00 PM
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Date: 11/1/2025 6:58:00 AM
Dear Iza, Congrats on taking 1st place in my contest. Your poem is unflinching and formally assured. You’ve captured Van Gogh not as a mythic figure but as a mind in motion, fragmented, luminous, and deeply human. There’s a raw precision here that doesn’t flinch from despair, yet remains artistically composed. It’s a difficult balance, and you’ve held it with clarity and force. Autumn Blessings, Iza, Daniel
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Date: 10/27/2025 2:57:00 PM
I see why you got POTD! Congrats!
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Date: 10/24/2025 5:09:00 PM
Powerful words. So many emotions are tangled within, and they are felt. Congratulations Iza, on Poem of the Day. Nice to meet you. Hugs and blessings, Brandy
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Date: 10/24/2025 3:10:00 PM
Good choice Iza! Congratulations on your Poem Of The Day~ October blessings
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Date: 10/24/2025 5:05:00 AM
Nicely done Iza and good to meet you. Enjoy your special day
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Date: 10/24/2025 4:44:00 AM
outstanding and deserving of POTD! congrats.
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Date: 10/24/2025 1:32:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Iza, congratulations on having received the award for poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 10/24/2025 1:23:00 AM
“Staring at a starry night It sings me a melodic, stunning melody Maybe the air that flows through my lungs Perhaps the heart that pumps my blood Is not what I truly need“ Wonderfully written and as genius as the painter was! Congratulations on potd!
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Date: 10/24/2025 1:12:00 AM
- Excellent poem, Iza - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) -
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Date: 10/23/2025 1:00:00 PM
Wow. Wonderfully written. The distress Van Gogh must have experienced is felt in every line of your poem. It's a fav for me.
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