Death Bed Poetry: Emily Dickinson

Deathbed Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Daniel Henry Rodgers 
Contest Judged:  11/1/2025 6:35:00 AM
( 3rd place )

Written: October 10, 2025


"I must go in, the fog is rising." ~ Emily Dickinson

The fog moves gently through the field,
touching each blade as if to say goodbye.
It leans against her windowpane,
a quiet guest come to lead her home.

Outside, the birds have gone quiet.
The air holds its breath;
She gazes once more at her fading garden,
where colors drift into soft gray peace.

Her lips part only to release a sigh,
the sound of something setting free.
No struggle, only the stillness
that comes when light meets rest.

And when the fog has lifted,
the room keeps her calm behind…
a hush, a whisper,
a bloom of white where her spirit passed.
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Kauffman Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Rowena, congratulations on your win. The spirit of Emily Dickinson flows through your gentle images. It is like she took your pen to write these serene lines. Wonderful poem. Blessings of joy to you.
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful message. Sending you warm blessings and joy in return.
Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Dear Rowena, Congrats on taking 3rd in my contest. This is a beautifully restrained elegy, elegiac in tone, yet never heavy-handed. The imagery is delicate and precise, and the pacing allows each moment to settle with quiet dignity. I especially appreciated how the natural world is a witness and guide, echoing Dickinson’s own sensibilities without imitation. Autumn Blessings, Dear Rowena, Daniel
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous words. I’m truly honored by the placement and by your kind reflections on my poem… I deeply appreciate the care you put into hosting and offering such insightful feedback.
Anaya Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Ah yes, a poet chosen by a true poet. Rowena, fav line is "a bloom of white where her spirit passed" as the white lily represents the restored innocence of the soul of the departed. When the light leaves us mortals, it's most illusive yet all encompassing & indescribable, yours is fabulous. October blessings
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful reflection!
Hind Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 11:32 PM
This is so nostalgic- I love Dickinson. Beautiful
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:56 AM
I truly appreciate your kind words
Godwin Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful
Velasco Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:57 AM
Thank you!
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