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Death At Our Door

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the end is near i sense it i feel its breath i hear its pulse low hanging clouds above our heads ever so slightly hover clipped by the shadow of its wings otherworldliness circles somewhat like a vulture deliberate and devious ready to pounce as soon as we let go submitted on December 10, 2020 contest 'It Feels Surreal' sponsor: Nina Parmenter originally posted on November 23, 2020

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 11/24/2020 4:12:00 AM

Line do read the comments section of my poem which I wrote for you. Darlene has written something wonderful in it. Take care. Love and hugs. Rama

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2020 10:03:00 AM

Thanks, Rama. Namaste ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/23/2020 4:53:00 PM

I don't know what to say... I simply hope that you can get past the dark clouds, and find a ray of sunshine eventually. Hope and Prayer, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2020 8:36:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. I'm feeling at peace and glad I focused on befriending silence. I feel the love around me. No worries ~

Ann Gilmour

Date: 11/23/2020 4:15:00 PM

Your words have truly moved me dearest Line and I send you my love and support. I know, for I have done so myself, that to express your feelings is cathartic and will eventually help with the healing process ~ and in time may take away some of the pain deep inside... Bless you dearest friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2020 8:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Ann. Your kind words mean a lot to me ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/23/2020 12:24:00 PM

Hello Lin, it does not matter what age we areYou are in my thoughts Lin. . The reason is death comes to all ages. I agree writing is the best way to keep busy. You are in my thoughts Lin.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/24/2020 11:28:00 AM

Your welcome my friend. enjoy your day my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thank you so much, Darlene ~

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 11/23/2020 12:21:00 PM

Hi Line, I hope your intuitive poem is not a premonition beyond each day bringing us closer..It was well expressed though. Of course you know death is nothing to fear any way. It's the suffering we all want to avoid..

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thanks, Nancy. I scribbled this draft the day before my husband passed away.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 11/23/2020 2:47:00 AM

This is a beautiful write, I have seen it happen more than once. Poetry is a great way to be busy. Reading writing both.my thoughts ar with you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2020 5:40:00 AM

Thank you, Rama ~ i'll be coming across scribbled notes i left here and there in the last weeks