Death and Love

The sunset bleeds into night
and my body bleeds into the darkness,
dragged over the abyss
claws rip into my flesh;
here I face my demons.
And my eyes, stare blank into grey twilight
warm hands grope
only finding frozen flesh
so cold, but so red.
And my skin, loses shade
paling into nothing;
wet warm lips descend
upon blue lips
if only to feel once more.
An my lips, feel you,
one last taste
before deaths kiss;
fingers feel for a heartbeat
brushing hair 
out of half-closed eyes.
And my body, is tugged
to you,but death?
Death is jealous.
A heartbeat strains 
in an attempt, final decision to be made.
And you, you fight to bring me back
and light fills my eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 7:45 PM
Ps. Where did "You" come from? And where have "You" been?....Let me go pay "You" my respects~With the honor and the pleasure of commenting upon another of "Your Beyond Fabulous Writes!!!":):) ~Oh, and this is a very raw, and just pick "You" up and carry "You" away writes...."Completely Spellbinding!!!"....
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May 19, 2009 at 7:38 PM
Smile~I have read these recent writes of "Yours" a few times thus far....And if it were I? I would do everything within my absolute power to bring "You" back!!!:):)~You know, "Beyond Precious Madison Thomer," when one meets a soul, as deeply profound and gifted as "Yours," it goes so very far beyond the flesh~"This Beauty!!!":):)~And to love anothers soul, is not like loving their body~"It Is So Much Deeper"~Does that make sense to "You?"~I hope so...."My Love To You Always, John!!!":):) ~
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