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Death and Life

Death, took you from me on a snowy winter day just like that; you were gone and now although still broken I must live my_ Life _________________________ April 6, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Death and Life Copyright Protected, ID 20-1241-691-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Let The Pens Flow _ Antonym sponsor, Jenish Somadas Third Place

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Date: 4/18/2020 7:33:00 AM
It is a difficult thing to do, to live one's life after a loss. But you expressed it well with this touching poem. Bless you. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/19/2020 1:00:00 AM
JC, thanks for the congratulations, yes, we never really get over the death of a person we love, we just learn to live with it, we push the pain deep inside and go on _Constance
Date: 4/16/2020 5:47:00 PM
Just as i would suspect, you wrote on the topic you do so well with, Dear Heart. A poignant entry and WIN! Congratulations.
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Date: 4/16/2020 6:03:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 4/16/2020 3:44:00 PM
Constance, I like how you made this flow so well within the specific constraints of this form. Poetry helps us to grieve, to remember, and to help others grieve. Bless you for sharing this with your community here at Soup, and congrats on the well-deserved finish. Hugs ~ John
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Dear Heart
Date: 4/16/2020 5:08:00 PM
John, thanks for the compliment on my poem and the congrats and hugs _Constance
Date: 4/15/2020 2:15:00 PM
Hi Constance. I am moved by this touching entry and genuinely sympathise with you. Congratulations on win. Wishing you well in your future life. Howard
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Dear Heart
Date: 4/16/2020 10:49:00 AM
Howard, thanks for visiting and for your compassion, death of a loved one is not easy, you may put is aside but it is always with you _Constance
Date: 4/15/2020 1:42:00 PM
Sad reality..Whatever happen life should go on.. Wonderful verse..Congrats on your great win Constance..
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Date: 4/16/2020 10:50:00 AM
Jenish, thanks for another wonderful contest and for my placement, yes, sadly death is a reality of life, and we must pick up the pieces of our broken hearts and move on _Constance